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Re: Adieu!
This is a really short poem so it's not like I can find much to critique lol but yeah, basically what the other reviewer said. It's a cute poem and ...
Apr 14, 2021 -
Re: Poetry is in the eye of the beholder.
That last rhyme was great. Anyway I love this and I agree with everything said. Poems are fun to write and yet, annoying. So many unsaid rules but yet there ...
Apr 14, 2021 -
Re: Whispering from the chasms of the Earth
Hello, I love the format of this poem, every line feels like the perfect length. There's a lot of good lines written in this poem to, and some good repetition ...
Apr 14, 2021 -
Re: Day and Night
Is that thomas sanders in your pfp or am I imagining things Anyway, I’m here to review. I loved the second half of this poem and how you put “from ...
Mar 6, 2021 -
Re: I love you my dear
You know the drill. I’m here to review this Ok so this isn’t the traditional “lovey-dovey our love is like fire” type poem. Which isn’t inherently a bad thing. I ...
Mar 6, 2021 -
Re: Life in an 80s Movie
Hey I guess I’m here to review. Haven’t done it in awhile, so here we go I don’t know much about the 80s or anything, but I mean the 80s ...
Mar 6, 2021 -
Re: Blue
Hey I am here to review this First off, I think this was pretty good for being written in a couple of minutes, I mean wow. I love this poem, ...
Nov 9, 2020 -
Re: Who Would've Thought & Don't Be Sad
Ok idk if it’s just me but I never know how to start off reviews, I always end up starting them the same way and ugh ANYWAY I’m going to ...
Nov 9, 2020 -
Re: diamond horses
Hello I am here to review this. Okay, this has nothing to do with the poem you wrote but you’ve written more reviews on your first day than I have ...
Nov 4, 2020 -
Re: it hurts to be good.
Hello I am here to review this. Amazing job on this poem, it flowed very well and I could feel the emotions of the speaker as if they were my ...
Nov 4, 2020 -
Re: The News Report
Hello I’m here to review this because I have 199 points and it is bothering me. Okay so first off this is really good and I love how you broke ...
Nov 1, 2020 -
Re: A Day in Quarantine
I love this. It’s really relateable, like literally just today I went to bed at 7am and woke up at 1pm. My sleep schedule is so messed up lol, but ...
Oct 18, 2020 -
Re: Tide Goes Out (Chapter Four)
Hey I'm procrastinating on my homework, so I decided to review this. First off, great description. Seriously. There's so much description in it and it really is good writing. This ...
Oct 7, 2020 -
Re: Surviving the zombie apocalypse as a highschooler Day #1
Hello I haven't reviewed in a while so here I am. I think this story is promising. I like the idea of the plot, and that she's pregnant during a ...
Oct 7, 2020 -
Re: "poetry is like pencils"
This had a very unique format. It was really fun to look at and my brain actually wanted to read this, which doesn't happen ever. I also like the uh ...
Sep 12, 2020