CreativeFreak

Hello :) So yeah, this is good. It explains everything fairly well, no real need for any extensive explanation. No corrections on grammar, everything is cool :)

Hullo. Well I'm in ninth grade and it pretty much is the level for me, I guess you might not understand it because you're too young, but if you wait ...

Anybody who doesn't like this series has to be mad. It is the only series I ever stuck too. I just finished reading the fourth one and again waiting to ...

I really wanted to read this series, but my school library only had on of them in the middle of the series...I think it was the second. I'm trying to ...

Haha, this is so funny. The beginning did confuse me but the end was a really nice twist. I enjoyed it. The only part I think you should edit is ...

Hello! Call me Freak if you please :D First: nice title! Is it Latin? I take Latin so it looks like it, but sometimes I get it wrong with French, ...

Hello, call me Freak! :D I'm sorry to say, but this piece did not interest me at all. Your grammar an whatnot fair bt it bored me after reading one ...

Aw this is so cute!! I loved it so much. I wasn't paying enough attention to the grammar to help you out on that, it was just way too good! ...

Hello! Call me Freak, if you will. Let's get started with a nitpick: Christs "Christs" is possessive, so it should be: Christ's. And that it's, great job, keep working, you're ...

Hello! Call me Freak, if you like. :D Well let's start: Pretty much you need a lot of commas, I wold post them, but there are just too many. Make ...

Hello! :D Call me Freak. Well... Only then the Siren Sounds Is this a name(Siren Sounds), 'cause other wise I don't know why you capitalized it... Great job! *Claps appraising* ...

Hello! Call me Freak :D Now, I am not trying to be mean, but this was kind of boring. Personally it didn't grab my attention once I started reading, which ...

Hello! Call me Freak, if you like. :D Well, let's start. First of all you kept capitalizing things, words: Salvation I don't know if you're trying to emphasize this, but ...

This is very good actually. It flows real well and the vocabulary is used great in the spots used, :D I don't really have anything to correct. Yeah you're are ...

Teehee, I already read this one before on Facebook ;) Nice job! Making it match up with the events in the book was a nice touch, like the apology, the ...