CreativeFreak

Hi. I'm Freak. :) I just want to make a quick comment (I'm not actually gonna review this, because it would take two hours). You should cut this in half. ...

Hi. It's Freak again. :) I'll just list the nitpicks again. :) Sorry if it's really long, but again, bear with me. that leads into the bathroom, shutting the water ...

Hi. I'm CreativeFreak, but call me Freak if you will. :) I'm just gonna list the nitpicks and small explanations, since this is such a long piece. Now I know ...

Hi Thana! :) I'm Creative. I liked your lyrics for the most part, but they seems kind of immature. Although it is original it annoys me. Lyrics need to be ...

Hi - Creative! :) I like the first poem a lot; listing all those good luck charms that don't work and then the metaphor about sidewalks and whatnot. Very clever. ...

Hi - Creative! :D I don't mean to offend but this poem bad. But that's OK. You're new; you'll get better. First of all, and I know I have no ...

Hey - Creative! :D So you are not untalented! You are actually very good at poetry. Hehe, consider changing that name. :) So, this poem is very good and it ...

Hey, call me Freak or Fry, if you will. :D This poem was...original, but really boring and predictable. It doesn't show my feeling, deepness or intensity. Needs work, but you're ...

Hey, call me Freak or Fry, if you will. :) This poem is very good and deep. I like it although I can not closely relate. I didn't really find ...

Hi, call me Freak or Fry, if you will. :) Nitpicks! This whole poem has problems with punctuation; you need some commas here and there, and in some places you ...

Hi, call me Freak or Fry, if you will. :D Nitpicks! I like this poem a lot, and the end was a very good surprise, but there are some things ...

Hi :) I really like this poem. It is so cute, yet so realistic! My favorite part was, It shows how a human might want to kill, How respect turns ...

Hey there! This poem I just find really dramatic and annoying; and to get to the point, I hate it. I see what you are trying to do, but this ...

Hi again! Okay. I literally squealed at the end and clapped my hands! I love this so much!! I think you did a really good job expressing the feeling of ...

Hey there. :) It's good to see some new people posting automatically! Hehe. Nitpicks: What if the world came crashing down you scream but they don't hear a sound? You ...