CreativeFreak

Hey there, Foxy. I truly love this so much. You've got some freakin' talent! :D Nitpicks: Everytime 2 Words (Every time) I hear your euphonic whispers in my ear, my ...

Hello, LP! I'm here! Late, but here. Okay. *Tugs on shirt* Let's get to work. :D If Hercules wanted fame, instead of life, if Gandhi chose to be selfish and ...

Hi, screamandshout. This was very strong and extremely good. It was well written and had a fairly good flow to it. The only thing that I did find wrong with ...

Hey, Iamnotperfect. I like this poem a lot, it was very good. The only thing I didn't really like was: Always present even when you don’t think about it, the ...

Hi, and welcome to YWS. :) I like this poem, the beginning starts off good but the contents are simple. Your punctuation is pretty bad though, you need a lot ...

Hi there. :) This is a really cool, good poem and I enjoyed it so much, but there are nitpicks: Rumors, cars, people another comma, you're listing things mischievous faces, ...

Hello! Not much to work with here, but I will make do! Behind closed doors is where I lie. Behind secret walls is where I hide. With all my fears ...

LOL. I have no idea how to review this, because it doesn't seem like a story, and it's, like, a whole bunch of ideas, plus there's no grammar wrong that ...

Hi. :) I like this story, but I think in the beginning you are focusing too much on what he is doing and not so much on what he is ...

Hello, retrodisco 666...that end part scares me, but okay! Great job, it's like a movie in my head. This is such a cute, real, relate-able story and you did a ...

Hello! :D This is impressive, you're better than me already!The imagery is amazing...There's nothing else to say. :) Good-Great job! Write on.

Well, I don't know the rules of Haiku's sooo, anyway! I like this. It's funny and I like that "Ah!" part. Your descriptions were good and the ending was fantastic. ...

Hello there! Ok, so I like what were trying to do here. I got your story but the punctuation didn't help my comprehension. From the very beginning I didn't know ...

Hi, there! I really like this poem: the beginning was captivating and by the end of the first stanza I knew what you were talking about. You have great descriptions, ...

Helloooo! :D This poem is pretty cool, but I don't get the point, I don't get what you were trying to say. I mean, I like the story, but to ...