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Re: "Deceiver" | The Lord of the Rings Online | A Fan Trailer's Voice Over Script
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Oct 8, 2021
Awesome script keep it up. Awesome script keep it up. Awesome script keep it up. -
Re: Graveyard
This is a short but great poem that is impactful without even having to say much by the pure topic of it and the way this is setup and selected ...
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Re: My realization
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Oct 8, 2021
Cool poem I can tell this is your interpretation of the reality of things and you were able to describe it through your own words in a nice and easy ... -
Re: Lizard
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Oct 8, 2021
Interesting and unique poem. Personally the way I viewed this very simply and straight forward. I imagined exactly what was said, and thought it was neat. This is my first ... -
Re: dirt
A very nice poem. The poem was very nice and simple yet detailed at the same time, it provides enough description to visualize it and be taken away by the ...
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Re: First Kiss
Romance isn't really my thing in literature, but I also always enjoy seeing a bit of it in literature because I find it one the most difficult things to put ...
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Re: The Afterlife
Great story your works are always good I look forward to them. One of the many parts I liked is where you described the actual feeling of being dead, "I ...
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Re: The Man Among his Work
Good piece I enjoyed even though I didn't understand it haha. I would have to take more time and read over it for me to fully understand the meaning of ...
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Re: the inevitable
This is nice I like how through your words we get sense of imagery even though you're describing emotions and feelings, which is something hard to transform into something we ...
Oct 3, 2021 -
Re: You Fool
This is one of the best thing I've read on this site. Personally I loved this. I'm not really writer or smart enough to critique or give constructive criticism, so ...
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Re: Dark Hours: The Beginning Chapter 1: Hell Bound
Great detail and descriptions it was easy to visualize for the most part and the details of being on hell made you feel like you were actually there. We are ...
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Re: The Perplexing Nosebleeds Of Ebonie Fantasma Chapter Two:
Very nice, I notice you took advise from a previous reviewer to add more suspense and you did just that when introducing the disturbing spirit. Everything seems fine to me ...
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Re: The Perplexing Nosebleeds Of Ebonie Fantasma Chapter One:
Nice and spooky I was able to roughly visualize the setting and the characters and you gave a good description of the spirit so I was able to visualize her ...
Oct 1, 2021
