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Ryouma is all about his idioms and proverbs so, yes, he taught that one (and others) to Hilda. As for Josette, she, Amit and Paula have those special circumstances about ...

I see your point with Nokor's phrase. I'll take a look a wee bit later and see if I can't simplify it a bit. As for the battle scenes, yeah, ...

I see your point with the highlighted paragraphs. I've edited the "moron" out and cut the other one down a bit. I still want there to be small analysis to ...

I see what you mean. Sometimes I make small tangents into other folks' minds and don't realize it. I've added a bit prior to Vanessa's thoughts to slow down the ...

Yeah, I see what you mean. The issue with showcasing Hilda's state on THIS particular fight is that it's kind of a curb-stomp. Not a whole lot of tension here. ...

Ryouma is speaking english with Maria, yes. I've had it in my list to rewrite the dialogue where he's doing so to add his accent but I haven't gotten to ...

I totally get what you're saying about the world. Problem is there isn't a whole lot to talk about in tundra so far up to the north (say Greenland). Have ...

Really, they don't know it's EXACTLY six but they can take a guess from the sun's position. With that, it's just a matter of adjusting the body's internal clock.

I write in the present simply because that'd how it always felt natural - honestly, I didn't know it was considered "trendy" until looking into it recently. Whenever I read, ...

Well, I usually prefer to go in-depth on the characters' looks when they first show up. Every now and then, I do make reference to their appearance but maybe not ...

Are you from the UK, by any chance? Most of the mistakes you pointed at can simply be chalked up different spelling between British English and US English, which is ...

Hmm, alright. I'll try to think of something for this in a bit - add something between her leaving and the conversation taking place. Thanks!

Ooh, right, right. I completely forgot about that. One thing to not is that the POV actually IS omniscient but I try not to abuse that omniscience too much. I've ...

It is a very, VERY long story, yeah. My chapters ended up being lengthier than they should've because of how Word was spacing out my paragraphs. :)

So many of what you asked was, indeed, focused on in previous chapters. I really appreciate the effort you took in doing this but don't you think reading all this ...