Corvus

this is a great piece, I like your writing style. here are some things I noticed. "Some days it’s like golden between you and I. " I would swap "golden" ...

this is an amazing song; the lyrics flow well and the tone is clear. I love the way you captured the emotion in the lyrics. I have no real critiques ...

this is a lovely little poem I like the way you used the background to add the poem. my one word of advice is to avoid using a text color ...

this is an absolutely wonderful piece of poetry, almost more of a short story. I love the way you described everything. not much I could find but here is what ...

This poem really paints a great picture, and the first lines definitely caught my attention. Here are a few technical things: "You, by the fire, contemplating what could’ve been, For ...

This is a lovely poem, your word choice is amazing. Here are a few things I noticed: "i wonder if they can breathe. it is difficult to know that the ...

this is an absolutely lovely story, your word choice is phenomenal. a few things I noticed: "Now if said individuals, perhaps, drank blood and were allergic to the sun, or ...

this is an amazing work, I like all of the language you used. your wording is incredible, but you are missing many commas. check your "I"s and make sure they ...

here a few things I noticed. "A pitcher of water might be this source, or the kitchen faucet if you are one of the ungrateful heathen that prefer tap." I ...

um wow. this is an amazing essay, I would almost call it a short story! I love your descriptions, they really bring your work to life. the first sentence, "The ...

This is an amazing poem, it gives a very beautiful feeling, like looking back at the past but knowing it is time to move on. I noticed you added commas ...

this is an amazing short story, you really invoked a peaceful, nostalgic feeling. I like how the title applies both literally to the load shedding causing the power to go ...

this is a great poem, very creative and well written. there are a few things I noticed. you used punctuation in the first sentence but not anywhere else. I think ...

great poem, very ironic. not much I could find to give you advise on but this is what I got. "And smoke chokes the air, blackens the sky." I would ...

This is a lovely poem, very vague. i notice that you describe the spiders as "spindeling spindling across the hardwood" this is a good line, but i pesonaly think a ...