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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Bah Humbug

    Hello, +1 here to review for a Mini Review Day! Sorry, I'm a bit tired, so it probably won't be that good, but no matter! On to the actual content!!!! ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Ascension Chapter 3- Premonitions Part 2 of 2

    I haven't read any of the others chapters, but I will review this anyway because it is in the Green Room and must be transported elsewhere! On to the actual ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: .

    HELLO! I am here on behalf of a Mini Review Day (15 minutes after Review Day ended). Suggested Revisions: 1) The air was filled with excitement as people were ready ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Pain of Waking Up

    Well, hello, Traunt (if that's not your nickname, please correct me, and I apologize). I'm best at reviewing poetry, so I have come upon yours and am prepared to tear ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: tick tick tick

    Hello Queerelves, I'm writing this on an iPod, so the ending result might be a bit screwed up. Anywho, this poem was pretty brief and I fancied it quite literal. ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Legend of He Who Endured: Prologue

    Hello, 15253! Do you have a nickname? Here to review, as promised! Nitpicks: 1) The king's defenses were more than enough to keep out normal men but since when had ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: I'll show him

    OMIGOD. BEST POETRY PLOT TWIST EVER. Jesus, Hadj, this is why I followed you. You are an AMAZING writer. *Takes deep breath. Is ready to actually review now.* So this ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: lost Lilly of Lilliput

    Hi, Dreamy! Here to review your poem, as promised! (Ok, a bit late, but all's well that ends well, am I right? Nitpicks: 1) a punch of blood red blush ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Goodbye

    Okay, so this is the review that gives me my third review star! YOU SHOULD FEEL SPECIAL!!!! :D Like myjaspercat said, this sucked me in right away. I really liked ...

    Aug 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Talking to God

    Wow, this was very bold. God is a very sensitive topic, so it's rather shocking (although not a bad thing) to see such a blunt take on the idea that ...

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Walls

    Well, I really liked this, although I didn't quite understand the true meaning of it. I am not the best at deciphering poems, so that's nothing to do with the ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: The Flight was on time...

    Nitpicks: "Hello dad, the flight is on time." Should be: "Hello, Dad, the flight is on time." (Insert comma after Hello and capitalize Dad.) "Love you, dad!" You need to ...

    Aug 1, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: A mysterious one sentence story...

    So, unlike some people may think, I actually think this deserves to be featured and does not resemble some other pieces like this that get featured (ehem, Strangelove, Blackwood, ehem, ...

    Aug 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: I am listening

    I really like this! The beginning captured me right away; the beginning was probably my favorite part of the poem. Nitpicckkkksssssss (and some content editing): I am listening, with bruises ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Koala's Climb

    Hi, I'm here to tell you that I really liked this poem, whether you consider yourself a poet or not! The reason I liked this so much is because it ...

    Jul 27, 2014


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