ConverseFireGirl

Oh. My. This is a beautiful piece of writing where I could really sympathize. When you were terrified the feeling was not mutual, I was hoping that this would end ...

This is so nice! I love writing poems about the sky and picturing it as a canvas!! :D :D My favourite bit is..: "There are days where wisps of meringue-white ...

Jeez, I swear these get better as you write more! I am not seeing any issues with spelling which is great, and I'm not seeing many if none repeated words! ...

Very nice poem! Welcome to YWS by the way, it's great here ^_^ Right, so I like this poem because it is, like you said, motivational, and it's been written ...

Thank you for notifying me of this coming out! It was well worth my time! Right, so I really like how you're building your character, Alice is becoming easier to ...

Hey there! A review for youuuu! You really deserve to be on the spotlight for this. Overall, this piece of work is well written and well thought. I particularly like ...

Oh. My. Lord. THIS IS SO COOL! When I read: "from 'The Lord of the Rings' movies." I clicked like. I mean, come on, this is so FABULOUS! I especially ...

Hey there! Here for a review! First of all, I love your descriptions. "The sand is pristine and white" "sting of a sharp sea breeze" Great descriptions. The only nitpicks ...

Wow, this is a really amazing piece of work! I love it, it's really uplifting and good to read. You've made it easy to read, and yet it makes the ...

Hey there! I am here for a revieww! :D I like this poem but I think you could improve it a bit? My favourite bit in my opinion was: "Love ...

Wow. This is really intense! Firstly, the beginning sentence attracts readers and makes them want to read on, which is great and a good skill to have. Also, I like ...

This is really good, hollyhuez! I was just as intrigued as I was in your prologue! Good work here, I personally quite like the length of your chapters, as they're ...

This is so good... I especially like the lines: "Write now, And write fast, For hopeful futures, And hated pasts." It's really well done! This poem is really good, I ...

This is such a good poem! I like the festivity here for starters (TWO DAYS! :D ) and the flow of the poem is really good in my opinion. I ...

Hellooo there, I'm here to review this fabulous work! First of all, I LOVE IT. You've written this so well and it totally captivates the reader into what happens next. ...