ConverseFireGirl

Wow... fortis.. your writing is amazing, seriously! This is so well done, I love how your spelling and the voice just sort of crumbles and deteriorates throughout until the last ...

Hey there! I feel awfully late reviewing this, considering it was published in February! Nearly a year ago... what. Anyway! Onto the review! A couple of little improvement which are ...

Wow, great work here! I don't have any more corrections to make than RavenLords, but I'll try :P Great story, I like the style and I also like the characters. ...

This is so beautifully written, I just love it! I personally love haikus, and you've captured the emotions and such just perfectly within these 17 syllables! "Zebra Stripes" - Such ...

Hey there! I am here for a review! :D Right, so great piece of writing, I really enjoyed reading this and the way you write... it's so intense and really ...

Hey there! Converse here for a review! Good piece of writing, at the start, I didn't really know what was going on at first, but that's my fault as I ...

Wow, once I started reading this, I just couldn't stop! A few little easy to correct mistakes...: "firey" - "fiery" (this happened twice. :P) "occured" - "occurred" "threshhold" - "threshold" ...

Hey! Converse here for a review! :) Right, so seeing as I haven't read the other chapters of your story, I'll be basing this review on mainly the actual content, ...

Wow, this is really good! :D I personally love haikus, as they are short and sweet and hold a lot of meaning and thought behind them, so great job. I ...

Wow, I really like this piece of writing you've done here... The story is really well thought through, and I totally get your meaning, especially how you highlighted it at ...

Wow! This is so amazing! :D I love your writing style in this, it's so brilliant! "shadows playing strings," Beautiful! The title intrigues readers, and the poem blows them away ...

Wow, this is really nicely written! Your wording is fabulous and works so well with the mood you are portraying in this piece. My favourite lines were...: "Winter awakens the ...

Hey there! Is is death? That's the idea I got (: I'll just say before I start, I don't usually like poems which rhyme and don't usually review them, but ...

Wow, this totally deserves to be in the spotlight! Amazing! I really agree with you here, seeing this down on paper (well, screen) totally brings the idea to life and ...

OH MY, I HAD MY SUSPICIONS BUT OH MY! ALICE IN WONDERLAND! :D This is a great piece yet again, michaelloffet, with good descriptions and a good scene that you've ...