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i tried to update the poem but it went horribly wrong and i created a monster!! i thought it was rubbish i just needed pepole's opinion thanks from your local ...

good poem it makes me a bit sad!

i not too keen on haiku's but i like this one, it is funny. GOOD WORK!

i agree it needs to be in stanzes .

The fighting flames they burn my heart, I gag and wish i never ate the poisend pie, i wish i never enterd this ring of fire now i will die ...

nice poem i really cant think of anythnk else 2 say.

this is no poem it is simply a list of words in althebetical order plz write something a lot more serious!!

worse poem ever are u sure your 49!

no offence but offence that could even be worse than my rubbish old ones "COULD"! try to be more serious.

i am not evil and the poem is under progress ps i am not a genius sob sob!

cool poem it's "Very nice"

OK i will stop the stupidity.

tell me if i can make anything better!

nice poem try to work harder on it

check my new poem abbadon! it is quite good!