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Hey, As I start this story my first question is why does it say introduction twice? Okay done with the story now. It was really well written of course this ...

Hey, Why has this been in the green room so long. I just don't understand. This is a really well written story in my opinion. I love the plot and ...

Hey, This was a fun little story to read. So I admittedly read it twice (Because I have no life). My one little nitpick is that I'm not overly fond ...

Hey, This was a interesting read, I admit. I like the concept here. My biggest nitpick about this poem is the lack of punctuation. It's a beautiful poem you have ...

Hey, I like reading your work it has a different spin then mine does and it's really well written as well. I couldn't find any spelling issues so there's that. ...

Hey, So admittedly when I first saw how short this poem was I was a little nervous. of course by now I always wonder why I get nervous because most ...

Hey. This story was really fun to read. I think you wrote it pretty well. Also, I noticed its just chapter one so I hope there will be more, because ...

Hey, The writer covered most of what I have to say. So, here's my small part. I wouldn't count this as a story but more of a into. While I'm ...

Hey, So I've been semi quietly following this story and so far its pretty good. So my nitpicks this story are mostly with punctuation. Simply because I could find no ...

Hey, So this is a really interesting poem. I would love to talk to you about it but I hope to get to that after the review. Okay, so here's ...

Hey, First off I LOOVVVEEE YOOOUUUUU. Thank you for writing thissssssss. I was going to write a review but I don't think I'm capable of that at the moment. So ...

Hey, This is certainly an interesting little story to say the least. After reading the description I braced my self for a lot. I was not prepared for this. I ...

Hey, This is a really enticing story. Right off the bat it is clear to me that this story has a lot of layers of depth which make this story ...

Hey, This is a really really interesting poem. I found my self captivated right off the bat. The use of science here really pulled me in. Its not often you ...

Hey, This is really great for being such a short poem. Its pretty emotional and has a lot of depth crammed into those few lines. One of the things I ...