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Hey, This was very fun to read, I enjoyed it quite a bit. So now I have arrived to get this out of the green room because something this great ...

Hey, I was a bit worried when I first glanced at this poem, I admit. I feel like not a lot of heart went into this poem, and it kinda ...

Hey, First off I really like the little piece of artwork at the top, I think it is a nice touch. I really liked the play on Adam and Eve ...

Hey, This is a fun little story :) I've looked at the Plot Generator before but never thought to use it...maybe I'll have to try it soon. Moving on, for ...

Hey, This is amusing I admit I enjoyed reading this. It was interesting and captivating with a interesting and well portrayed plot. However I have a few nitpicks, so here ...

Hey, Don't worry, this isn't too much like Hunger Games. In fact, it just might be better. On some scale I'm sure it is. Moving on, this was a really ...

Hey, This was a fun read, I admit. I like the message and how you support it throughout the entire story. You also displayed a really nice use of vocabulary ...

Hey, Wow, this is a really powerful piece of poetry. I think part of what makes it so is that its relateable. My one little nitpick is the layout however. ...

Hey, This is an interesting story to say the very least. With out a doubt it gave me some entertainment in 5th period. As well as a distraction from my ...

Hey, I love reading your work. If that wasn't clear already. This was a really well written story. I really had no complaints the first time I read it all ...

Hey, This is a really interesting story. First off why did you have to end it like that! It was perfect and amazing but I want morrreeeeee. If it isn't ...

Hey, First off I really like the way you decided to end this poem, it brings everything together very well and I don't feel like I was left with a ...

Hey, This was a really interesting poem for being so short. I think you had a beautiful transition between crazy and sad. It was really well done and I almost ...

Hey, This was a really interesting poem every time I read through it. I think you have a really nice concept here combining both religion and space. While it can ...

Hey, I would like to start out by saying Nice story! It was a fun read and I really like how you ended the story. There's not a lot to ...