ClackFlip

It's too short to do a serious critical analysis on, so I'll put my snobby pipe and snobby glasses away. Let's review this thing sentence by sentence (not grammar, just ...

I love a good cake. What does that have to do with this review? Absolutely nothing. Actually, I'm using it as a segway to a thing, but...whatever just play the ...

I have one word for this chapter. Boring. I struggled through the whole thing, trying to get to a point where I would go " Wow! This was slow moving, ...

This is astonishingly well written. Like, wow dudeeeeeee. This is one of the better pieces of writing I've encountered. If only... Well, I guess I've got to gripe about something ...

Hi Storm! Clack here as requested. I do apologize for my short review, but honestly, I liked this. It's actually pretty well written, not so good I would say New ...

Hey Pen! Before you read further I'd just like to drop this side note. I get a little ranty in this review, but I hope I don't come across as ...

You're going to hate me for this but: why don't the Vigilux or whatever they're called just have guns and use the shield spell? You haven't laid out a time ...

They killed my father... They stole my city... They took my life from me in the cruelest of ways, by letting me keep it. Now I will have my revenge. ...

Hi MadMonk. Have you ever heard of David Eddings? Well, he was a fantasy writer back from the '80s. His best known work is probably the Belgariad if you've ever ...

Hi Atsmai! town hall and thought of how she was going to get into Town Hall. Redundancy of town hall here and in the paragraph below. Well, this is showing ...

There are three words that I need to say about this piece to get across my critique. Make-me-care. Now, human trafficking is a huge problem in the world. We all ...

Well, that was a zinger of an opening. Oh, sorry. Hi Falconer! Back to the opening, let's talk a little about that, shall we? The thing that made me love ...

Hi Jasper! I'm going to not be horrible with this one and point to this line --> like running cold hands under hot water after playing in the snow hurt. ...

Hi Jasper! :3 I'm clack, and being the constantly moronic elephant I am I'm going to be disgusting Have fun! The girl I tapped turned around to look at me ...

So, from what I've seen people have covered a lot of this chapter, but no one has touched on the one subject that I feel needs to be touched on. ...