Citrus17

The stanzas say 'use' instead of 'used' - that was the only mistake I found though. Your poetry is heavenly. It has such nice flow and beautiful description and wording. ...

Wow, they are such gorgeous lines! Inspirational and delicate, a beautiful piece of writing :) I love your wording, it's unique and professional! Very professional! Your writing style is natural ...

Whoa! Your description is epic and I love your writing style. There is a super hooking and mysterious feel to this. I love it! There were no mistakes that I ...

I like this a lot. It is true and emotionally packed with great wording and description. I did notice one mistake... "bases" should be "basis". I think that was in ...

This is so great! You have good description, nice flow and great wording :) I like your characters, you have developed them well. Your wording is soft and careful, cleverly ...

Wow, this is such a great piece of writing and such a hooking prologue too. I am so intrigued to find out what this story is going to be like. ...

Wow, this is the best work I have read on here so far. I get easily distracted and end up reading one paragraph of a story and then stopping, going ...

A great chapter :) It is a story of determination and encouragement. It has a great message and is strong. Your writing is pretty good. You're really good at describing ...

So emotional and well written. I can definitely relate to this piece of writing, it was sad but sweet. Your flow was so nicely consistent and didn't break at all. ...

I felt so much pain in this piece of poetry. My favourite lines were: "Every time I close my eyes another knife; memories of your face, laugh, and smile." I ...

Aww, this was sad. I'm getting a black moor for my birthday this weekend, they are such cute little things, what did you name yours? I'm really sorry it died ...

So powerful. I love your perspective of Alice and the way she sees the world. You capture imagination and creativity in your writing and I love that. The flow was ...

Wow again! How do you do it? You are so good at capturing things as they are and putting so much emotion in to it at the same time. Your ...

Wow. So beautiful. I loved your lines, they roll off the tongue so smoothly. I honestly can't find no faults in your writing. The flow was strong and soft. Your ...