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Re: Waking Up to Manhattan
Wow. The detail you put into this is just astonishing. Everything just seems so... smooth and realistic. I really like that aspect of this, being that it makes the work ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Motionless
Cirute here to review! I'd like to start by saying awesome work. The story is pretty epic. I found no errors within it and I can criticize nothing, so basically ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Tumult
I really liked this poem! It had a great flow to it, not choppy at all. The whole message to it is somewhat vague, but not so much so that ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: A Fountain
Nice, very nice! The poem is short and, strangely enough, quite uplifting. The poem's flow, though without rhyme, is exceptional! The word use is also amazing! I don't know why ...
Jan 16, 2014 -
Re: Windows
Hello HostofHorus, Cirute here to review your story! And what a story it is! Very interesting and thought provoking. The overall story line is enjoyable, the characters are great, and ...
Jan 16, 2014 -
Re: Dumbfound
This is very interesting! I love the eeriness it has to it. The whole thing about what he's thinking, how he got to where he is, and of course, the ...
Jan 11, 2014 -
Re: Let's talk about Sex
Don't take this the wrong way, but the whole part about girls getting all the blame is kinda an ignorant thing to say. I know a guy who's girlfriend got ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: Karma
This is an extremely interesting story. The fact that it has an eerie tone to it makes the story all the more enjoyable, and you certainly pulled this off quite ...
Jan 7, 2014 -
Re: Next-pectations
I really liked this. The upbeat feel of the poem was a great reprieve from the dreary poems about cutting and whatnot I so often see. I liked the style ...
Jan 7, 2014 -
Re: The Nightmare
I really liked this! It seems like more a a bad shroom trip than a nightmare (Trust me, been down that road, didn't like it) but this makes it all ...
Jan 4, 2014 -
Re: Just a Cliché
Hi, Lucrezia, Cirute here to review your piece! Wow, this was good! The language and word use that it was written in was great! I'm going to really have to ...
Jan 3, 2014 -
Re: No More
Hello, Bloodink, Cirute here to review your poem! I would like to start by saying that I am a right bit confused by this, being that the first half doesn't ...
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: Splendor
Greetings DefiantAuthoress, Cirute here to review your story. Wow. Let me start by saying that this story has great flow, great language, and is an overall great read. Story's like ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Vulnerable
Hi, ajt, I guess I'm gonna review this! The lyrics are VERY creative, and though I'm not one for romance poems, I found this quite enjoyable. The word use makes ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: Behind the Door
Wow, that was a twist! This was a simply amazing piece, and I truly enjoyed it. There is nothing I can criticize about this, besides the fact that I am ...
Dec 7, 2013
