Cirute

Hello Eferhilda I enjoyed this story. Though not a fan of Madonna, and having never heard the song referenced, I still enjoyed it. That right there is an immediate sign ...

Hello Lightbringer, This poem, in terms of word and rhyme use, is quite good. The language used gives the reader a clear image of what the poem is about, yet ...

Finally, someone else who knows the pain. Living in a part of the country where the fastest way to figure out the date is to build stone henge at nearest ...

Hello DhaRason, Cirute here to review your poem. Firstly, wow. The wording in this is exceptional. The way you blend the lighthearted nature with poetic beauty is stunning. I especially ...

Yes, absolutely agree. I've never seen anything longer than, perhaps, 2000 words in the literary spotlight, and that's a stretch. There are plenty of good novel chapters, short stories, and ...

Hello Fortis (I don't honestly care if you don't capitalize your name, I'll do it anyway!) This... was a very interesting work. I found that I really liked the style ...

Hello, *This is not meant to be rude or sexist at all, but simply implying the view society teaches men to have on woman.* Okay, when your poem needs a ...

Hi Lucrezia, Before I begin I would just like to say that I am so very sorry that I skipped reviewing this chapter. It's weird, I just somehow forgot to ...

Hi Sheep, Wow, that was a powerful story. The way you wrote the narration was amazing, as was the theme. I liked the fact that you kept it rather simplistic, ...

Hi, Cirute here to review! Wow. This was really, really, really awesome. As a doom metal fan, I enjoyed the darkness of this poem. It really reminded me of a ...

Hello, Blue, Cirute here to review your chapter. So before I begin, I'd like to say that obviously something got messed up when you went to post this. The paragraphs, ...

Hi Lucrezia, Cirute here for another review on your awesome novel! Okay, I've been a little engrossed in this and have read ahead a few chapters, but was too lazy ...

Hello Lucrezia and happy review day to you. Another review and another great chapter of a book I am really starting to enjoy. The whole corporation thing that you have ...

Hello NightlyOwl. I really liked the feeling that this poem gave off. To me, it felt almost dreamlike, but that's just me. I'm still trying to interpret the deeper meaning ...

Hello Lucrezia, I'm finally getting around to reviewing your second chapter. Sorry for the wait, I've been lazy. :P Firstly, I really like the dialogue you use in the story. ...