Chrisoh99

Very Nice ! I really like the words that you chose ... (word choice). I enjoyed it ! The words rhyme. It flows smoothly. Excellent !

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Hey.That is a nice poem. I like your word choice. It would have been better if you had separated the stanzas. It looks like a text. :P Nice...

Hey... Review: You wrote a very nice poem. I like your style. It's just the voice. While reading, I felt that the poem was silent. No one was there. Furthermore, ...

Hey... Review: You wrote a very nice poem. I like your style. It's just the voice. While reading, I felt that the poem was silent. No one there. But it's ...

Hello. I really like your poem. It is clear. Plus, I like the repetition that you built in lines 11-12-13. Good Job! I also like your name :P

Perfect! I really enjoyed reading your poem. It is very clear and not vague, and I like the repetition that you built in lines 7-8-9-10. Nice Job!! Plus, the structure ...

Perfect! I really enjoyed reading your poem. It is very clear and not vague, and I like the repetition that you built in lines 7-8-9-10. Nice Job!!

Nice Poem, but you really need to be careful for verb tense.Plus, you need to make the verb agree with the subject. Furthermore, you need to read books so that ...

Good Job... I really like your style. Plus, it's a good thing that you tried. The girl's heart resembles the heart of a devil, so that means she is lonely. ...

Great! But you need to add more lines or another stanza. I like the structure. Your poem is organized, but it needs more Happy Writing, Chris

Nice Poem... Plus, I really like the repetition that you built in this poem. Good Job. But you're really hurt, are you? :P

Hey.. Nice poem, but I suggest (for next time) writing the poem more neatly.... Make "the" instead of "d".... You're too cool to do that!? LOL :P Just Kidding.