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Perfect! I really enjoyed reading your poem. It is very clear and not vague, and I like the repetition that you built in lines 7-8-9-10. Nice Job!! Plus, the structure is also good. I encourage you to write more. Happy Writing !
Perfect! I really enjoyed reading your poem. It is very clear and not vague, and I like the repetition that you built in lines 7-8-9-10. Nice Job!!
I apologize for me lack of substance and actual critique in this comment, but I just wanted to tell you how much I liked your piece.
It made me smile.
Neva
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Awwww glad it made you smile!!