ChocolateLlama

I love this poem, mainly because it really corresponds with high school, at least my high school career to date. I really lied the imagery you created, and the little ...

Not too deep, not too shallow. I like it. My favorite season happens to be autumn, so I may be a little prejudiced there. Even though it wasn't to long, ...

Like sincerelymayhem, I really enjoy the rhyme scheme. I can totally relate, except my secret place is the roof of my house. It's nice to get away and be alone ...

Wow. What go me the most is that I can totally imagine this being a part of everyday life in the future. While I was reading I was reminded of ...

Heart-warming was the first thing to pop into my head. I'm not even going to review your grammar because it's so spot-on correct, and so was the writing in general. ...

I enjoy this piece because it's easy to relate to, plain and simple. I used to be depressed and I did cut. Before I get too deep, here's a fun ...

I think that this is a truly wonderful piece, and I really love the message, but there is room for a bit of improvement. First of all, I'm pretty sure ...

Like the few before me, I couldn't really understand it, but that doesn't make it any less emotional. I feel like it's just a small story of lovers? Even if ...

Like angelwing12, I was hooked right from "I hate her". I don't know why, but I think it's because I needed to find out who she was and what the ...

Okay. Well, not sure where to start. First thing though, you made your arguments in a very rude and offensive way, justifying them with God. Not saying this is wrong, ...

Wow. This is really deep and thought-provoking. I didn't see any grammar mistakes, and, from the first sentence, I was completely drawn into the paper. I've thought about this kind ...

This is a pretty great story. I like how you were able to, not to be racist, convey the ghetto slang into the story. It's pretty nicely written, and it's ...

One of my favorite parts in this fanfic was the "forbidden act" given to the Word-Eater: He can't eat names. That kind of thing has always been something that I ...

I honestly think this describes me as a smaller kid. I was bullied quite a bit, mostly from a kid who I had to sleep in the same room with, ...

Sorry that the last one was blank, something happened with the message. Anyway, I honestly love this poem. It's not easy to convey a plot twist ending in so few ...