ChocolateCello

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Okay, I'm gonna over do this review a bit but hopefully it'll help you in future works. This is you're first work on YWS if I'm correct. ...

Hey! Chocolatecello here! Typing on a mobile device so I'm keeping this short and sweet. I really like the message and you did a fantastic job putting everything in words. ...

Hey! Cello here! Welcome to the site! This was really nicely written. Very descriptive, very enticing. A few minor errors throughout though. Me, My love, my mind, my effort, is ...

HEYY PROMISSED REVIEW FROM CELLO! OKAY SO THE RHYMING PATTERN-MINOR EDITS (What's with the caps, I ask myself, I don't know. And why are you talking to yourself, I respond.) ...

Hey! Cello here for a quick review! Wow, this was powerful. Your descriptions were so beautiful, so perfect and they really had me feeling what the speaker (You) were feeling. ...

Wow Okay You put this perfectly into words. The beginning of last school year and the previous year, I really had this problem, constantly feeling like the second choice or ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! This was definitely and interesting start but I'd like to talk about emotions here. I'm not the best when it comes to writing emotions but I still ...

Hey, Cello here! You're an amazing writer when it comes to writing with emotion. I could really feel what the speaker was feeling. A few notes... I couldn't tell the ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Okay I have to keep this review short because I'm on a school computer and class is about to end. I really enjoyed this. Everything was very ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! (I'm typing on a school computer and I don't really have a good feel for the keyboard so I might have a few typos) I really wish ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! I really liked this poem, it was very cute and it made me laugh. I'm going to go section by section. The wait is far from bearable ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Okay- you said not to go easy. (If it's unclear where any of these quotes are from, they're in order) In fact, her plan was to get ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! I really liked this story. It was very creative and well written. Watch your tenses though, you slip up a bit at the beginning. It's a little ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here. This was really good, a lot of well written emotion. I'm not the best at 'praising reviews', I usually just do edits so this review is going ...

Okay- So i just read this thing on 'what isn't a good review' and apparently saying 'Wow! Best idea I've ever heard!' Isn't helpful so I kind of don't know ...