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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Prologue to Stockholm Generation

    Hey there! I'm the Chirave Canicthus here to review your work! First off, I have to say I'm rather impressed with this. It's cool reading this, but I'm a bit ...

    Sep 9, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Death Wish

    G'day! Tis the Chirave Canicthus here to review your work! The first published Short Story that's still up. I commend you for that, writer person. This thing is wonderfully descriptive. ...

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: The Waiting Game

    Hey! I'm the Chirave Canicthus here to review your work! I had a lot of fun reading this, not because the kid was rejected by his real-life "friends," but because ...

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Chalice of Life: Chapter 1

    Hey! I'm the Chirave Canicthus and I'm here to review your work. You requested this in my Wrff thread. In that case, I'm really sorry I'm late. So yeah. Onwards ...

    Sep 6, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Black and Gray

    Heylo! I'm the chirave canicthus here to review your work! I really like this. Really. I want to point out how awesome it is that you decided to go first-person ...

    Sep 5, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Alice

    Bonjour! I'm the Chirave Canicthus and I'm here to review your work! So I really like this story. It's sad because the one thing that remained positive in a dystopian ...

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Prologue.

    Bonjour! I'm the Chirave Canicthus and I guess I'm here to review your work! The first thing I have to say about this is your title and description is it's ...

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Breaker of Chains - Chapter Six

    I should have seen it coming. Why didn't I? The relationship was too cool and I was just getting the hang of liking Kaisar a lot. Then BAM. He's wounded, ...

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Breaker of Chains - Chapter Five

    Hey. 'Tis the Chirave Canicthus here again for another review! My goodness Scar. Any idea how much fun I'm having reading this thing? You chose a cool plot bunny to ...

    Sep 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Science Fiction Re: The Transmission

    Ooohhhoohooo! "The lump of blankets that hid her brother." Sneeeakkky. I like it. The prose in this is rather cool. It gives you an image for your mind to think ...

    Sep 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Breaker of Chains - Chapter Four

    It's the Chirave Canicthus here to review your work! Ah. I see what's going on... (At least with the Cherani. I think...) So Kaisar said that it was a Cherani ...

    Sep 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Deleted

    Bonjour! It's the chirave canicthus here to review your work! Starting with the title. Call of the Zodiac. It kinda sounds weird to me, as there are a bunch of ...

    Aug 31, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: The story of Scar

    Hey! It's the Chirave Canicthus here to free your work from the Green Room! The title seems a bit… bland, donchya think? I do like that there’s a fanfic for ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: The House Isn't Haunted (Part 1)

    Ahha! Here I am, the Candid Columnist, or also known as Meek and Mild-Mannered Chiravian. Well, nonetheless, I'm here to rescue your work from the clutches of the Green Room! ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Dead Water

    Wwwwooooowwww.... This is the Chirave Canicthus, or the Candid Columnist, here to review your work! Reading through this, I'm surprised by the amount of imagery in this piece of writing. ...

    Aug 30, 2015


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