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Re: Prologue to Stockholm Generation
Hey there! I'm the Chirave Canicthus here to review your work! First off, I have to say I'm rather impressed with this. It's cool reading this, but I'm a bit ...
Sep 9, 2015 -
Re: Death Wish
G'day! Tis the Chirave Canicthus here to review your work! The first published Short Story that's still up. I commend you for that, writer person. This thing is wonderfully descriptive. ...
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: The Waiting Game
Hey! I'm the Chirave Canicthus here to review your work! I had a lot of fun reading this, not because the kid was rejected by his real-life "friends," but because ...
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: The Chalice of Life: Chapter 1
Hey! I'm the Chirave Canicthus and I'm here to review your work. You requested this in my Wrff thread. In that case, I'm really sorry I'm late. So yeah. Onwards ...
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: Black and Gray
Heylo! I'm the chirave canicthus here to review your work! I really like this. Really. I want to point out how awesome it is that you decided to go first-person ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: Alice
Bonjour! I'm the Chirave Canicthus and I'm here to review your work! So I really like this story. It's sad because the one thing that remained positive in a dystopian ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Prologue.
Bonjour! I'm the Chirave Canicthus and I guess I'm here to review your work! The first thing I have to say about this is your title and description is it's ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Breaker of Chains - Chapter Six
I should have seen it coming. Why didn't I? The relationship was too cool and I was just getting the hang of liking Kaisar a lot. Then BAM. He's wounded, ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Breaker of Chains - Chapter Five
Hey. 'Tis the Chirave Canicthus here again for another review! My goodness Scar. Any idea how much fun I'm having reading this thing? You chose a cool plot bunny to ...
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: The Transmission
Ooohhhoohooo! "The lump of blankets that hid her brother." Sneeeakkky. I like it. The prose in this is rather cool. It gives you an image for your mind to think ...
Sep 1, 2015 -
Re: Breaker of Chains - Chapter Four
It's the Chirave Canicthus here to review your work! Ah. I see what's going on... (At least with the Cherani. I think...) So Kaisar said that it was a Cherani ...
Sep 1, 2015 -
Re: Deleted
Bonjour! It's the chirave canicthus here to review your work! Starting with the title. Call of the Zodiac. It kinda sounds weird to me, as there are a bunch of ...
Aug 31, 2015 -
Re: The story of Scar
Hey! It's the Chirave Canicthus here to free your work from the Green Room! The title seems a bit… bland, donchya think? I do like that there’s a fanfic for ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: The House Isn't Haunted (Part 1)
Ahha! Here I am, the Candid Columnist, or also known as Meek and Mild-Mannered Chiravian. Well, nonetheless, I'm here to rescue your work from the clutches of the Green Room! ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Dead Water
Wwwwooooowwww.... This is the Chirave Canicthus, or the Candid Columnist, here to review your work! Reading through this, I'm surprised by the amount of imagery in this piece of writing. ...
Aug 30, 2015
