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Re: Dear Moon
Hello, Chips here with a review. I liked the concept of the moon you have here, it can always be taken through interesting paths and interpretations. I liked how you ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: Never at Peace
Hey, Chips here with a review. I'm really liking your style of writing, Purple. You've especially got a talent with philosophy. I liked the formatting of this poem, and how ...
Jul 19, 2014 -
Re: Look for the Sun (4 poems in 1)
Hello, Chips here with a review! Well, I actually had to read this poem twice to see where the whole poem actually is, due to the formatting. This is not ...
Jul 19, 2014 -
Re: Fridge on a Hangover
Hey, Chips here with a review! This was quite a humorous idea, I liked the concept you had of an inanimate object such as a fridge being hangover. So good ...
Jul 19, 2014 -
Re: REDACTED
Hey Chips here to review this "Awesome...Awesome to the max" work of yours. I'm obviously a fan of experimental and creative poetry, so I quite liked your title and your ...
Jul 18, 2014 -
Re: But I still like you.
Hey, Chips here with a review. I liked how you kept a focus on liking the other person throughout your poem and how personable and relate-able it was, so good ...
Jul 17, 2014 -
Re: Undone
Hey, Chips here with a review. Well, I liked that you kept a focused narrative in your poem and utilized the title in the poem itself. I also liked how ...
Jul 17, 2014 -
Re: Beauty- The Real Deal
Hey, Chips here with a review. Well, what an inspiring essay you have here. It has a good message and portrays some issues that people face on daily base, concerning ...
Jul 13, 2014 -
Re: Seriously, Tig?
Hello Chips here with a review to hopefully help your poem, as suggested :L. You have a good idea here, dogs have a very playful element which you have shown. ...
Jul 12, 2014 -
Re: Brothers
Hello, Chips here with a review, as requested :) Firstly, I liked how informative you were on this piece, it really gave the reader understanding on what's going on in ...
Jul 11, 2014 -
Re: Bubble of Water
Hello, Chips here with a review, as requested :) I really liked this piece, it was somewhat philosophical and was cohesive. It had a clear focus and it could be ...
Jul 11, 2014 -
Re: I Guess I'm Floating
Hello, Chips here with a review. I thought this was a piece which was very relateable to most people. It had a focus on romance throughout which was good. You ...
Jul 11, 2014 -
Re: Where I'm From: To Mom
Hello, Chips here with a review. This was a lovely personal piece of poetry. It was light and genuine and I'm sure your mom would love this poem too. I ...
Jul 10, 2014 -
Re: The Dead Sea (in two parts)
Hello, Chips here with a review. I thought your poem was very interesting and unique. It was written in an original way and you used metaphors which were quite peculiar ...
Jul 4, 2014 -
Re: Peace (life through my lens)
Hello Chips here with a review. Welcome to YWS too, hope you're settling in well so far. Well, you have a lovely message of forgiveness centering around your essay. The ...
Jul 3, 2014
