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  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Dear Moon

    Hello, Chips here with a review. I liked the concept of the moon you have here, it can always be taken through interesting paths and interpretations. I liked how you ...

    Jul 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Never at Peace

    Hey, Chips here with a review. I'm really liking your style of writing, Purple. You've especially got a talent with philosophy. I liked the formatting of this poem, and how ...

    Jul 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Look for the Sun (4 poems in 1)

    Hello, Chips here with a review! Well, I actually had to read this poem twice to see where the whole poem actually is, due to the formatting. This is not ...

    Jul 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Fridge on a Hangover

    Hey, Chips here with a review! This was quite a humorous idea, I liked the concept you had of an inanimate object such as a fridge being hangover. So good ...

    Jul 19, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: REDACTED

    Hey Chips here to review this "Awesome...Awesome to the max" work of yours. I'm obviously a fan of experimental and creative poetry, so I quite liked your title and your ...

    Jul 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: But I still like you.

    Hey, Chips here with a review. I liked how you kept a focus on liking the other person throughout your poem and how personable and relate-able it was, so good ...

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Undone

    Hey, Chips here with a review. Well, I liked that you kept a focused narrative in your poem and utilized the title in the poem itself. I also liked how ...

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Beauty- The Real Deal

    Hey, Chips here with a review. Well, what an inspiring essay you have here. It has a good message and portrays some issues that people face on daily base, concerning ...

    Jul 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Dramatic Re: Seriously, Tig?

    Hello Chips here with a review to hopefully help your poem, as suggested :L. You have a good idea here, dogs have a very playful element which you have shown. ...

    Jul 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Brothers

    Hello, Chips here with a review, as requested :) Firstly, I liked how informative you were on this piece, it really gave the reader understanding on what's going on in ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Bubble of Water

    Hello, Chips here with a review, as requested :) I really liked this piece, it was somewhat philosophical and was cohesive. It had a clear focus and it could be ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Romantic, Realistic Re: I Guess I'm Floating

    Hello, Chips here with a review. I thought this was a piece which was very relateable to most people. It had a focus on romance throughout which was good. You ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Where I'm From: To Mom

    Hello, Chips here with a review. This was a lovely personal piece of poetry. It was light and genuine and I'm sure your mom would love this poem too. I ...

    Jul 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Dead Sea (in two parts)

    Hello, Chips here with a review. I thought your poem was very interesting and unique. It was written in an original way and you used metaphors which were quite peculiar ...

    Jul 4, 2014
  • Article / Essay » General, Spiritual Re: Peace (life through my lens)

    Hello Chips here with a review. Welcome to YWS too, hope you're settling in well so far. Well, you have a lovely message of forgiveness centering around your essay. The ...

    Jul 3, 2014


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