ChipsMcCoy

Hey, Chips here with a review. Well, I liked that you kept the story focused throughout, nothing went off the main topic. However I have some suggestions which may be ...

Hey Viv, Chips here with a review. "The Fault In Our stars" has been quite a popular book this year, and it was interesting to see your view point on ...

Hey, Chips here with a review! Welcome to YWS too. First off, I loved your use with the poetic device of pathetic fallacy I felt your poem was its strongest ...

Hey, ANADIR! Chips here with a review as requested. I liked the realistic feel you had going on here in your story. It read almost like a stream of consciousness ...

Hey LanguidLiger, Chips here with a review! Good Points: You have a vivid and interesting perspective on quite a lot of things from what I can see here. You have ...

Hey, Chips here with a review. I liked the focus you kept with each stanza and the simplicity you expressed the Earth in. However my main issue with this is ...

Hello, Chips here with a review. I liked the positive encouragement that this essay was all about and the message it was trying to convey. I thought the way you've ...

Hello, Chips here with a review. Here, you have an interesting idea which you can go many directions in. I liked the use of rhyming you used extensively, which was ...

Hey, Chips here with a review. I liked the emotion and focus you had in your poem, it seemed as if it were really written for someone else. I do ...

Hey, Chips here with a review and welcome to YWS! I liked how you maintained a focus on being gone and the questions for the reader to think about as ...

Hey, Chips here with a review. Welcome to YWS also! I thought this was a cute poem, the concept you had of the "writer's hand" and the relationship between the ...

Hey, Chips here with a review. Well, this was a really lovely yet sad poem. You captured the emotion in it wonderfully and made the reader feel empathetic. I liked ...

Hello, Chips here with a review. Well, I liked how personable it was and I'm sure many people can relate to the emotions you've conveyed here. I also liked the ...

Hi, Chips here with a review. I liked the interesting style of writing you had going on here. It was a very descriptive poem and the feeling of being cold ...

Hey, Chips here with a review. I could really sense the emotion and tenacity of love within this poem, you captured it well so good job on that. It was ...