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Re: A Hundred Years
Hi! Chips here to review. Well, what a heartfelt and emotional poem you have here. The effort you put in shows, it was clear, concise and the story was direct ...
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: Boundless
Hi there, Chips here to review! Your poem had a really great voice to it and I loved the topic you chose. It wasn't the usual love/romance/crush cliche type narrative, ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Who Am I
Hey Chips here with a review. I too, love the Breakfast Club movie and I can see how the inspiration came about relating to your piece. To me this wasn't ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: My Bully
Hey Chips here to review. Well I liked the idea behind this and the imagery created was vivid and interesting. It was quite a different perspective of a "bully" in ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: What is Beautiful?
Hello, Chips here with a review. I really liked this poem. It was a realistic and delightful view of how people in society should view themselves in a positive way ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: Momentous
Hi Chips here with a review. I liked the opening; "Have you ever considered what mattered with matter? When the matter of the matter, mattered to you." It was a ...
Apr 18, 2014 -
Re: Deleted
Hi, Chips here to review. This was actually a very insightful piece of poetry. I liked how it was almost written like an ancient story and being summarized, it could ...
Apr 18, 2014 -
Re: Lifes relaxing sounds.
Hey Chips here to review. I really liked the opening, it was intriguing and it flowed well together. I also liked how you started off describing the sounds which created ...
Apr 18, 2014 -
Re: The melodrama of a food addict
Hey chips here to review. I absolutely loved this, it was engaging and funny. It had a great tone and rhythm which flowed well together which each phrase. The rhyming ...
Apr 18, 2014 -
Re: The Hell I live in
Hi chips here with a review. This was an emotional piece of writing it had a fearful and negative tone to it which was expressed well in description and imagery. ...
Apr 18, 2014
