ChipsMcCoy

Hey, Chips here with a review! I actually really enjoyed reading your poem it generally had a nice flow. It has philosophical connotations, I liked the enigmatic paths you took ...

Hey, Chips here with a review. This poem seems like a very personal piece that came from a perhaps sad and vulnerable place in the characters life. It has the ...

Hello, Chips here to review! Well you have quite an interesting concept here, it also seems philosophical in reference to the origin of creation whether good or bad. So well ...

Hey, Chips here to review! Well, what a nice poem you have here, I like that you've put your thoughts out as questions here to show the reader your ponderings. ...

Hello, Chips here to review! I thought was a personal piece of poetry which was also quite insightful. It was written simply and was straight forward to understand the type ...

Hi, Chips here with a review! Well, what and interesting yet enigmatic poem you have here. Enigmatic, in the sense that it could have a whole range of meanings as ...

Hey, Chips here to review! Welcome to YWS as well :) I really liked the concept of your poem, it was slightly philosophical. It seems as if a lot of ...

Hello! Chips here to review your poem. Welcome to YWS also :) This was quite a realistic poem, not so much humourous however. I liked how you highlighted the scenario ...

Hey, Chips here to review! I really enjoyed reading your poem, it had an ambience of nostalgia, it reminded me of the 1920s-40s era which was insightful. It was interesting ...

Hello, Chips here to review! This seems like a very personal piece which had a lot of emotion behind it so well done on that. I especially liked the sense ...

Hello! Chips here to review. I thought this was a really nice poem, with an interesting topic choice. It had a great voice to it also was written in a ...

Hello, Chips here to review! This was quite well written the time and thought put in certainly shows. You have an interesting concept here of Angel vs devil, good vs ...

Hey, Chips here to review! I found this to be quite nostalgic and creative, it also had a great narrative voice to it. However it didn't have a very clear ...

Hey Chips here to review! Well, your poem was quite short and had a clear message but there are improvements that could be made. I felt in general your poem ...

Hello, Chips here to review! This seems like a personal poem, not the happiest of subjects but nevertheless it came from an emotional place. I think this had a great ...