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i agree with matt...(*gasps* sam!). its not really my thing either considering horses happen to be on the list of things i hate. *shrugs* however, it's celar that you like ...

this poem was short, quick, easy-going and i liked it...the words flew together well and the shortness of it was excellent considering that you explained all that was necessary to ...

this was a good poem but after the but I of your soul. , i kind of lost interest. other than that, the beginning was interesting and i love the ...

this poem was very meaningful and i enjoyed it tremendously...the words flowed very well and the theme was rather intriguing considering that i was able to relate. however, if you ...

i love first person stories...this however, was unlike anything I have ever was uniquely written and it's unique stuff that becomes famous..this story is rare and irregular--which makes it sensational

I don't think anything is wrong with a rhyming poem. In fact, I think it's great to rhyme if you know what you're doing. However, when I try to rhyme ...

For some reason, this poem made me cry. This...I'm being very honest, is one of the best things I have ever read and believe me, I do not say this ...

I agree with marzipan--this was really nice but yet, it was hard to understand in some places, especially with a couple of run-on sentences here and there. But other than ...

I agree with Skye Demon...this poem was beautiful. The ending was what really caught me and had me thinking, "WOW." I really liked this one, though. *Sigh* Why can't I ...

This poem was absolutely phenomenal. It was disconjointed (is that a word?) is some places but this part doesn't need to be changed at all: "But you will not come ...

Hmm...interesting poem....however, I think the following should be changed: "No more will I be blue." to "No longer I'll be blue."

But one day she knows she'll cut too deep, forget bloods not cheap, and fail to awaken from her sleep. This part was especially beautiful. I think, however, that in ...

For the strangest reason, this poem sounded like something that Cynthia Voigt would have written. Strange, but yet appealing and intriguing. I really did enjoy this after the first stanza, ...

i really enjoyed this and you had a way of keeping me reading. i especially enjoyed the beginning of each of the letters...when writing like this, it's always important to ...

"pace by pace by pace " should have just been "pace by pace" tomorrow was spelled wrong. "Upon re-opening his eyes he saw to great surprise One of their men, ...