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It was really cute I guess I could say. I didn't really find a lot of emotion...just a soft neatly put together piece of work. It's not really my style, ...

I'm being transparent here... "Somehow, I thought we would stay the same forever, like in eighth grade when you used to make fun of my clothes or in ninth when ...

The title alone was cliche...reminded me of the ever-so-overrated Judy Blume book "Hello God it's Me Margaret." I like almost didn't read it. It seemed broken in places and I'm ...

When I read "[and phone booths]" I started thinking about that song by Death Cab for Cutie called Phonebooths. And this poem reminded me of it. I must say, Brad. ...

The one thing I appreciate about your stories is that you when it comes to the dialogue its like...you can take it anywhere. And there's no pause which gives the ...

Kind of cliche, including the title. But I guess cliche is alright sometimes. "before...before what? we run out of ideas?" "and collapse with the first breakup with the first makeup ...

Very narrative. I think it would be better off in the narrative section...I'd move it there if you want me to. Also, reminded me of an Avril Lavigne song or ...

I'm impressed. By the title, I thought I would hate it. However, I'm glad I took the time to read it. The imagery was well thought out. The only stanza ...

Wow Bobo. I loved it. When I first started reading it, I expected to find the cliche tale of how someone's heart has been broken and I started not to ...

Haha, it's not about a guy either. So like...what's it about then? It is about a relationship, is it not? I do agree with Mattie though...the first stanza was a ...

I'd have to agree with Brad...heh... The rhyming scheme was decent...did seem disconjointed or anything. But seriously,like I and so many others have said one million times, you shouldn't make ...

I must say, Liz. This is the best thing I have ever read by you. I'm extremely impressed. The imagery was great from beginning to end and you really played ...

Where do I feel “belonged”? and The world is vast Didn't seem correct. I don't know. These two lines truly bothered me. Against my power Against my will Against my ...

I also agree with Kylie J but it was kind of hard to read with Che Guevara over there( ) because I kept thinking you were talking about him.

I guess I would have to go with the exact oppisite of what Arvandor me, this is one of the best poems I've read by you along the Grant line. ...