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I agree with Matt. It did have a lot of depth to it and a lot to take in. The only thing: "you're too scared to be impulsive, too afraid ...

not all promises are made to be broken and when i tell you that, i promise it's not a lie and i want you to search the black inside you ...

I've been meaning to buy the White Oleander but we never really go to the bookstore anymore and the library never has it in. Oh well. I'll just let you ...

"you know tomorrow will yield a better yesterday and the fright of real tears is the only feeling you have right before you fall asleep." I wasn't liking it much ...

Once again, I think some of the lines could be combined. Especially in the beginning. Towards the end, it doesn't seem choppy. "Left alone tears Staining ruptured Sanguine mutilated cloths ...

Well, the title sent chills down my spine and I was totally expecting something different. Slightly dissapointing but I'll try to ignore that. Some of the short lines like: "Time ...

I am angry with my mouth for reading this poem. Okay. I'm sorry. That's not nice at all. This poem reminded me of one of those teen books they sell ...

Um well...you always do a good job with imagery and you use your words in a way that I haven't seen anyone else do. However, I just can't seem to ...

Yeah...not all poems could be songs. Unless you're just a magnificent composer, I guess you could come up with something. I've tried to turn some of my poems into songs...heh...didn't ...

Unorthodox for sure. But I loved it anyhow. Especially how you combined the words. Sometimes when people do that, they seem to do it just for style and it doesn't ...

I loved it until this: You give advice that you refuse to keep, You never practice what you preach, You want tolerance but can't tolerate, You're unlearned but you still ...

I actually liked it to till the longer stanzas...they made me yawn. They were written nicely but I personally, didn't have an interest. Overall, by the talks of it, it ...

Yes, I would have to agree with Jack...the beginning and the end kind of threw things off. However, I know your poems by the way you write and well, the ...

Very metormorphic...perhaps too metormorphic. Maybe that's why your poems are sometimes so hard to understand. If you added just regular phrases in here and there I think it would kind ...

For some reason, this poem reminded me of a movie and my mom. I think the losing the keys part...well, the whole second stanza. It's like you know my mom. ...