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Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 3
Hi, Cheetah again to review chapter three! This was good. To be honest, I liked the first two chapters better, but that's just my opinion. I liked the ones before ...
Nov 9, 2013 -
Re: Stand up!
Hi, Cheetah here to review your story. I enjoyed reading this. Although there was a lot of repetition, I guess that was the point. I especially liked this part: She ...
Nov 9, 2013 -
Re: Feed the Fire
Hey, Cheetah here to review your poem! I'm usually not that into short poems, but I really liked this one. The message was simple, clear, and to the point. The ...
Nov 8, 2013 -
Re: deleted
Hello, Cheetah here, ready to review! This was so touching. As I was reading this, I felt truly sorry for Sean. You really did a good job of showing the ...
Nov 8, 2013 -
Re: Stand Strong
Hi, Cheetah here to review your poem. Wow. I absolutely loved the first stanza. The rhyming was great, the beat was spot-on, perfect. The second stanza was also good, but ...
Nov 7, 2013 -
Re: Chapter 1
Hello, Cheetah's here again to review your chapter! This was really interesting. I'm curious to learn more about Lucas and how he knows your main character. There weren't many mistakes ...
Nov 7, 2013 -
Re: Prolouge
Hi, Cheetah here to review your piece! This is okay as it is, but it has a capacity to be even better. I liked the voices you used, and I'll ...
Nov 7, 2013 -
Re: Dancing In The Minefields- chapter four
Hello, Cheetah here to review your chapter. This was really good, I enjoyed reading it. I especially liked how you showed emotion in your main character. Good job! :) There ...
Nov 6, 2013 -
Re: The Titan
Hi, Cheetah here to review your poem this evening. :) I really liked this theme. The way you defined it was unique. I especially liked the very end, this part: ...
Nov 6, 2013 -
Re: Hell's Gatekeeper (Chapter 4)
Hi, Cheetah here to review your chapter. This was good, slow, like Buggiedude said, but good. Although I haven't read the previous chapters, I have a decent picture of what's ...
Nov 6, 2013 -
Re: Reluctant Warrior
Hey Griffin, Cheetah here to review your story. I enjoyed reading this. It was intense and gripping. Before I say anything negative, I just want to tell you, good job. ...
Nov 6, 2013 -
Re: Underwater
Hi Brana, Cheetah here to review your wonderful poem. :) I really liked this. The message was very clear and to the point. I think these were the strongest lines: ...
Nov 5, 2013 -
Re: Perfect Imperfection
Hello, Cheetah here to review your poem. Wow. This was really lovely, I can tell you put a lot of thought into it. I definitely think this is the best ...
Nov 5, 2013 -
Re: Shattered Illusions
Hi, Cheetah here to review your lovely piece! :) You have a very interesting concept here. I like it. You really made me think and, as a writer, that's definitely ...
Nov 5, 2013 -
Re: Flowers
Cheetah here, ready to review your piece! Well, this was definitely interesting. I'm not quite sure if I completely understood it all, but that's okay. I really like your description, ...
Nov 4, 2013
