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Re: The Field Of Time
Hey, Timmy! Cheetah here to review as requested! I don't know what to say. This is gorgeous, absolutely beautiful. I loved the images it painted in my mind of a ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: The 71st Hunger Games
Hello TheMissingPiece, Cheetah here to give you a quick review! I liked this idea and I can't wait to read more. I especially think it's interesting that you chose to ...
Jan 15, 2014 -
Re: The Man Inside
Heya, Timmy! Cheetah here to give you a quick review. I totally agree with this. When I first read your title I thought this pome would be about a man ...
Jan 11, 2014 -
Re: Broken Pieces
Hello tronks, Cheetah here to review your piece. I really loved this story and I enjoyed reading it! Your description was great and you knew your characters very well. I ...
Jan 11, 2014 -
Re: A Writer I Am
Hello WritingWolf, Cheetah here to review your piece. I really enjoyed reading this! I liked the concept as well as the rhythm, which was very unique. The only nit-picky error ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: Certifiably Insane
Hello froth, Cheetah here to review your piece! I really enjoyed reading this story. It was short and to the point which I really liked. I also liked how well ...
Jan 5, 2014 -
Re: Halcyon days
Hello Laure, Cheetah here to review your poem! I don't usually review haikus, but here goes: :D This was so beautiful! I loved the imagery and I've highlighted some key ...
Jan 3, 2014 -
Re: Waterfall - Page 1 Part 1
Hello katiekatt, Cheetah here to review your prologue for you. First of all, welcome to YWS! I liked the simplicity and peacefulness of this. I am, as well, confused about ...
Jan 3, 2014 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 7
Hello Aravis, Cheetah here. It is my pleasure to review this chapter! I liked this installment's description and language. I especially liked the way you let the reader know what ...
Jan 3, 2014 -
Re: One dance, one life
Hello FlowerPower, Cheetah here to review your piece. I definitely liked the concept here, it made the whole story an enjoyable read. Your use of language was also well done. ...
Jan 2, 2014 -
Re: Fireflies
Hello SunsetSprite, Cheetah here to review your marvelous songfic! I really, really liked this. It was simple and easy to understand which is good because it draws in the readers. ...
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: Before I Go
Hi fortis, Cheetah here to review your poem. I love palindrome poems! They amaze me every time I read them. I loved the message here. It was very clear and ...
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: Prolouge (through the tunel)
Hello Themaddcater, happy Review Day! Cheetah here to review your piece. I enjoyed reading this. You used great language and the story seems interesting so far. As Michael said, it ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Mirage
Hello Mirage, happy Review Day! Cheetah here to review your poem. I really liked the flow of this. As fortis mentioned stanzas would be nice, but that aside, this was ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: 《TRUST ME》
Hello Maryanne, Cheetah here to review your piece! First off, I want to say, I enjoyed reading this. You moved things right along and paced it all perfectly. I really ...
Dec 27, 2013
