User avatar

Cheetah

Cheetah

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: The Field Of Time

    Hey, Timmy! Cheetah here to review as requested! I don't know what to say. This is gorgeous, absolutely beautiful. I loved the images it painted in my mind of a ...

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Horror Re: The 71st Hunger Games

    Hello TheMissingPiece, Cheetah here to give you a quick review! I liked this idea and I can't wait to read more. I especially think it's interesting that you chose to ...

    Jan 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: The Man Inside

    Heya, Timmy! Cheetah here to give you a quick review. I totally agree with this. When I first read your title I thought this pome would be about a man ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Broken Pieces

    Hello tronks, Cheetah here to review your piece. I really loved this story and I enjoyed reading it! Your description was great and you knew your characters very well. I ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Writer I Am

    Hello WritingWolf, Cheetah here to review your piece. I really enjoyed reading this! I liked the concept as well as the rhythm, which was very unique. The only nit-picky error ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Certifiably Insane

    Hello froth, Cheetah here to review your piece! I really enjoyed reading this story. It was short and to the point which I really liked. I also liked how well ...

    Jan 5, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Halcyon days

    Hello Laure, Cheetah here to review your poem! I don't usually review haikus, but here goes: :D This was so beautiful! I loved the imagery and I've highlighted some key ...

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Other Re: Waterfall - Page 1 Part 1

    Hello katiekatt, Cheetah here to review your prologue for you. First of all, welcome to YWS! I liked the simplicity and peacefulness of this. I am, as well, confused about ...

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 7

    Hello Aravis, Cheetah here. It is my pleasure to review this chapter! I liked this installment's description and language. I especially liked the way you let the reader know what ...

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Health, General Re: One dance, one life

    Hello FlowerPower, Cheetah here to review your piece. I definitely liked the concept here, it made the whole story an enjoyable read. Your use of language was also well done. ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Fireflies

    Hello SunsetSprite, Cheetah here to review your marvelous songfic! I really, really liked this. It was simple and easy to understand which is good because it draws in the readers. ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Before I Go

    Hi fortis, Cheetah here to review your poem. I love palindrome poems! They amaze me every time I read them. I loved the message here. It was very clear and ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Prolouge (through the tunel)

    Hello Themaddcater, happy Review Day! Cheetah here to review your piece. I enjoyed reading this. You used great language and the story seems interesting so far. As Michael said, it ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Supernatural Re: Mirage

    Hello Mirage, happy Review Day! Cheetah here to review your poem. I really liked the flow of this. As fortis mentioned stanzas would be nice, but that aside, this was ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: 《TRUST ME》

    Hello Maryanne, Cheetah here to review your piece! First off, I want to say, I enjoyed reading this. You moved things right along and paced it all perfectly. I really ...

    Dec 27, 2013


We are great at fearing the wrong things.
— Hank Green