Cheetah

Interesting. I'm not going to review your dreams, cause that'd be just plain weird but I do think it's cool you remember all this. There's lots of details and some ...

Hi, Cheetah here, ready to review on this Review Day! Well, I have to admit, I am somewhat confused. Here's what I got from the story: There's a person who ...

Hi, Cheetah here, ready to review your piece on this marvelous review day. This was very interesting and something I haven't come across before. The repetition is good and you ...

Hi there, Laura! Cheetah here, ready to review your piece! I really enjoyed reading this. Of course, I can totally relate to it. Procrastination is one of the most dangerous ...

Hi, Cheetah here, ready to review your piece. I liked the description you used in the first few paragraphs, how the girl felt alone. It flowed very nicely into her ...

Hi, aouther2b. Cheetah here, ready to review your piece. I agree with @emjayc and @therealme, this was very emotional. It was beautiful. I think this was the best section: You ...

Hi KaspynPaxian! Cheetah here, ready to review your piece. This is a very unique piece of poetry. I've never tried to write in this style because it seems difficult to ...

Hi, Cheetah here. This is so beautiful- I love it! It's amazing that you've been here for seven years- I've yet to be here for 7 months. Even though I ...

Hai there, Cheetah here, ready to review for you today. Wow, this really was a good poem. I never really thought of life as a bus, but I guess that's ...

Hi, Cheetah here, ready to review your piece! This is very well-described. I liked the way you spaced out your scenes- nothing happened to fast or too slow. There was ...

Hi, Cheetah here, ready to review this lovely poem. First off, this is really good! I can definitely relate to this love for fantasy, I love it myself! If it ...

Hi, Cheetah here, ready to review today! This is interesting. I like the language you used- it was pretty descriptive. I also liked your spacing. It made it easier to ...

Hi, Cheetah here, ready to review. Well, this was okay. It could be really good if you made it a bit longer, so let's get down to business. Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation First ...

Hi artofthepen15, Cheetah here, ready to review! Okay, this was pretty good, I liked your choice of words and this poem is well written. There were a few small things, ...

Hi artofthepen15! Cheetah here, ready to review your piece. First off, this was amazing. REALLY amazing. I could feel all the emotions the characters were going through, and the characters ...