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Hey! Here are a few things: ~Try add punctuation. It'll help the poem flow better and won't confuse your readers ~Try adding stanzas ~Please don't make the last line that ...

Hey! Sorry this is so short but I read this and wanted to say a few things. The first thing is that I feel like when you swore in this ...

Hey! I really liked this poem but I do have a few things to say: ~Try adding punctuation to the poem. This will help it flow better and look better. ...

Hey! Just here for a quick review :) Immediately I was really pleased with your imagery and description. There are woah like WOAH. :) Unusual names :P I wonder what ...

Hey! Just a short review. So I really liked the idea of this poem but I felt like it has a great deal to improve on at least for me ...

Hey! Here's a quick review on your novel :) When I was reading this I noticed that you were telling instead of showing which is a problem most writers have ...

Hey! I really like the idea of this poem and the length but I feel like it just isn't strong enough at the moment. I think once you add more ...

Hey! I'm here to do a quick review on your poem :) "Act as you don't hear an care" "That's only t bring you down" A small typos Think about ...

Hey! So you're my 100th review ! Thoughts on Plot, Characters, Dialogue Descriptions! Descriptions! Write them in I know you can :) I usually write a short character description after ...

Hey! I don't think this is necessarily a review. It's more like the thoughts and ideas I had about your lovely work: (in other words a short review xD ) ...

Hey! I wanted to give you a quick review :) So the first sentence sort of confused me and it confused me more as I read the rest of the ...

Hey! This is Alice here to review your poem. Story There isn't much story except, well there is a person talking about life. Grammar, Punctuation, Confusion, etc. When I first ...

Hey! This is Alice here to review your poem. Story So there is this sailor who left home quite some time ago and he is very far from home now. ...

I really loved this a lot! A couple months ago when I first joined YWS, I told everyone how I was never going to write poetry and that I was ...

Hey! I'm here to give you a review which is not really needed since this poem is amazing!!! I love the style of the poem. Ugh I just love this ...