Charm

Hi BrokenHeartsAri, What's Working: Your poem has strong emotion throughout. The frantic state of the speaker is conveyed through your language and short lines. You have good ideas here. I ...

Hi ayelenwritesstuff, What's Working: This is a good short story you have here. It's hard to write short short stories so I'm impressed with how you were able to fit ...

Hi luminescence! This is a really beautiful poem. I really liked it and I wanted to help you make it even better so here are my thoughts: My review is ...

Hey Momo! Thanks for asking me to review your story! What I liked: • So far, I really like your story. I'm interested to find out what is going to ...

Hi Star! I haven't reviewed in like a year or so, so I hope this review is good and helpful. First things first, I would like to start by saying ...

Hey Via! I haven't reviewed in forever so I'm sorry if this isn't the best. I've sort of forgotten how to do this :b I really like the imagery of ...

Hey Shaniac! I’m finally here. I’ve been saying that I was going to review this for a long time and now I am finally here. I’m going to try and ...

Hey TheWeirdoFromBeyond! It's been awhile since I reviewed but it's review day so I thought I'd give it a shot. Hopefully this is helpful. If you find any of my ...

Hey ScarlettFire! I haven't reviewed in forever but hopefully this is still helpful! He rolled up onto one shoulder, looking across the basement to find the dark, shadowy being pinning ...

Hey Manilla! I'm excited to read and review this, so let's just get into it. Grammar and Syntax: *all alterations made by me are in bold and I change/add things ...

Hey Manilla! Thank you so much for asking me to review this. It really means a lot! To be honest, it's a lot more fun to review things when people ...

Hey SunsetTree, This is a really nice, short, white-space poem―my favorite! Still, I have a short, little review for you. Hopefully it helps! There's only one wording issue I found ...

Hey Queenie! I just wanted to say that your flow is really nice. I have a few critiques but nothing much. It's mostly wording issues so hopefully you don't mind ...

Hey Katnes! It's been awhile since I've reviewed anything (mostly since I've been writing like crazy for my novel and NaPo) but I decided it's about time I do some ...

Hey Ink! It's been a long time since I've reviewed anything so hopefully this is helpful! I really like this poem and since the last time I've read some of ...