CharlotteS

Thank you! I'm going through being bullied at the moment and needed to release so that's where the inspiration came from.

Omg thank you

Woah. Thank you! This made my day!

OK thanks.

Wow. Where to start with this. It was amazing. From the very first word you had me drawn in, picturing everything that was happening. Your characters were completely believable and ...

Thank you. This all does make sense and I am working on the things you have mentioned. Thank you for your critique.

The beginning of this was amazing. There are a few things that need changing though. fore example your *i* needs to be *I*. always start with a capital letter and ...

Anytime.

Aww, well u have risen above them and the results, (this poem) is amazing.%uD83D%uDE0A

Yes this did help. Punctuation isn't necessary in poetry which is why my punctuation may seem slightly bad. Any way thank you for this.

Any time.

Thank you for this. I was struggling with my grammar when I wrote this so you are completely entitled to tell me my grammar is awful. I had to laugh ...

I like this. It does show quite well what concerts look like. Everyone pushing towards the edge and others actually getting on stage. I actually don't have anything bad to ...

Sorry, this review posts twice for some reason....woops%u263A

I loved this. I think you captured perfectly how someone trapped inside their own mind feels. I love how you start with what you don't know, how someone/something in your ...