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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Bully

    OK, I loved this. I generally don't enjoy reading poetry doesn't rhyme but I actually really liked this! I love the message behind this. Especially when you say, 'Never-mind, I ...

    Jan 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A good girl

    Wow, this was certainly interesting. I love how it rhymes. I don't find many poems like that so well done. Any way, I like the message in this, although I ...

    Jan 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Daggers

    OK, this was the most fascinating yet bizarre poem I have ever read. Can I just say, I love the fact you rhymed. It isn't often that I find a ...

    Jan 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: in the skin of an angel

    This was nice. I loved the description and the words you used. It is an interesting sort of poem, it doesn't rhyme but it flows nicely. I enjoy that. I ...

    Jan 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: A Letter To Myself

    I loved this. It is unusual these days for me to find poetry that rhymes, so this was right up my street. I like how you laid the poem out ...

    Jan 10, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: Hey there, normal person.

    This was an interesting piece of writing. I'm not really sure what to say. This seems full of anger and hate. Like this has happened or is happening to you ...

    Jan 9, 2017
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Cure me from my mind

    I loved this. I think you captured perfectly how someone trapped inside their own mind feels. I love how you start with what you don't know, how someone/something in your ...

    Jan 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Forgiveness

    So I liked this poem. I think it didn't quite reach it's full potential though. It's length is fine and doesn't bother me but it's hard to read it as ...

    Jan 9, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: fragments of us left in january

    I enjoyed reading this. It does capture the feels of starting a new year and still trying to gather up what remains of your life. Can I just say, when ...

    Jan 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: I'm not a lovin' fool

    I enjoyed this. The emotion is beautiful and I feel the message is very strong. I think the format is great and it goes well with what you are saying. ...

    Jan 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: It Drips From My Tongue

    Nice, I liked this. I wasn't sure what you were talking about though. It is really well written but your meaning isn't clear. The language you used was colorful and ...

    Jan 6, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: restart

    I like this. I feel it's shortness adds a bit of quirkiness to it. I like how you ask a question of the reader, this gets them thinking. Good tactic. ...

    Jan 6, 2017
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Burning Bridges

    So I enjoyed reading this. It was filled with emotion and I feel this gave it a personal edge. I love how there was a betrayal from a brother. I ...

    Jan 3, 2017


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