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WOW. So I do read some of the novels on here but this was the first to actually grab my attention and compel me to read till the end. I ...

Wow! I really liked this. I love how sometimes it rhymed and sometimes it didn't. That's an interesting and a good stylistic technique. I love the language you use and ...

WOW. I love this. It's crazy. You have captured reality and have expressed it in such a manner that I just fell in love with the way you write. This ...

Um. So....I LOVED THIS! The detail, the story, the characters. Everything. I love being transported to a different place. With this story I felt fear for David and was crying ...

OMG! Thank you. Finally a poem that rhymes. I love poems that rhyme. I don't enjoy poems that don't. Your poem not openly rhymed, it also had strong language. I ...

Hi! So I thoroughly enjoyed this poem! Not only does it rhyme, oh my gosh thank you for that, but it is also emotional. Your choice of language is phenomenal ...

I really liked this. Although I personally have not been hurt by a boy, my twin has and this poem described what she went through when they broke up. I ...

WOW. I really like this. I feel the short simplicity of it helps to push the message through. Your use of language and literary techniques are good. I love the ...

Hi DivergentDemiGod another divergent demigod here for a review. I liked this. The way you set it out was awesome! It was different but made complete sense. I feel the ...

Ok, I really like this. I like how you have made the teachers fight instead of the students fight. This sort of flips stuff around. One thing I would say ...

Wow. Where to start with this. It was amazing. From the very first word you had me drawn in, picturing everything that was happening. Your characters were completely believable and ...

Well this was nice. I like how there is a rhythm to it, I don't find that in a poem that doesn't rhythm these days. The language is a bit ...

Oh my gosh! I loved this! It was amazing. Your characters are believable and the emotion that evidently flows from cress is unbelievable. At the beginning you did tend to ...

The beginning of this was amazing. There are a few things that need changing though. fore example your *i* needs to be *I*. always start with a capital letter and ...

Well, this was amazing. Your characters were very believable and your vocabulary was great. There needed to be more information about the my opinion. I love the story behind this ...