Hi!
So I thoroughly enjoyed this poem! Not only does it rhyme, oh my gosh thank you for that, but it is also emotional.
Your choice of language is phenomenal and your meaning precise and clear. I particularly loved the line, 'When perfection is a flaw and love is a lie'. Like wow!
One thing I would say is when writing poetry one should always try to start the lines with capitals.
However apart from that comment I have no other criticism. I absolutely loved this poem and hope to read more form you in the future.
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