Charizard821

Great work on this! I really love how you took something as simple as a child's bedtime and made it so.... poetic! The words you used were great, there wasn't ...

Excellent work! I really found nothing wrong with this piece so great job! I love your approach to the whole what romance and love is thing. You hit it out ...

Well done! I really enjoyed this little poem because you have managed to ask a great question about something that - at face value - doesn't seem very intriguing. But ...

While poetically astounding and enticing in every way, I think the ending of the poem kind of ruined it for me. I'm not sure if you were going for poetic ...

While I enjoyed this story, it left a lot to be desired. Most of it being detail. What I want to know is how this guy got signed on to ...

Well done on this poem. It was overall a good, solid piece of writing. However, I think it was much too short, and - as someone else before me touched ...

Well, it appears you summed things right up! Yep, it's me, the Luigi's Mansion Easter Egg guy! It's been a while, eh? Anyways, you really did capture every reason why ...

An honourable poem, to say the least. I love how you took careful time to make sure that everything worked in a poetic, yet fluent way. And you chose a ...

How right you are Gravity! Jeez, why do I love reading your work so much? Anyways, you are 100% correct about the ugly face/soul thing. Naturally, as a guy, I'm ...

Wow. Another masterpiece. I'm usually never into a depressing/cold-hard-truth style story, but I did like this one. All the usual stuff was there. Great grammer, great sentence fluency, all that ...

Now, this is what I like to see! After reading Abner, I figured I'd check out another one of your stories to see if I liked it better, and I ...

Wait... What? Look, this story was amazing. I really loved how, even though it was short, you captured my attention with good word structure and thought process. But whereas the ...

Wow... Brilliant is all I can say... Simply brilliant. Everything was perfect. The writing, the sentence fluency, everything. I have NEVER been as enchanted or beguiled by a realistic story ...

Another amazing beginning! This time, I noticed a couple mistakes, but I assume this story was one of your first ones published on the YWS. Even at that, the story ...

As soon as I saw your poem in the literary works section, I had to click it. I LOVE ice. There are too many fire lovers (or pyros) in my ...