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Re: Just One Second
Harro, again ^-^ Does the narrator really exist, and where does he live? O.o I wanna kiddnap him XD Haha jk jk jk I LOVED this! XD I lov how ...
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Re: Closure
Harro, well, let's review ^-^ I've put the parts I liked in blue, and the parts I think may need a bit of work in red :) You gave me ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Hesitation
Can You Say IN-TER-TAIN-ING :D That was effing awesome! I was hooked from the first line. I didn't think I would like one about Harry Potter because fanfiction typically annoys ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: The Hounds of Autumn
Harro, Zerokelvin ^-^ First off, I love the title. Second, this part------- Autumn’s hawk flies free, Shredding the rain. -------Made me think you’re talking about the coming of fall, and ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Something More
Harro, Jesusfreak ^-^ First off, I’d like to say that I LUV the theme behind this. And I don’t mean you HAVE or NEED to do this, it’s just a ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: The Meaning
Harro, sgppoetry ^-^ Grammer and spelling mistakes aren't such a big deal to me. Its about the written words that should be judged. But, that being said, I thought you ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Balkline
Harro ^-^ I have to admit, it was a little puzzling/confusing. (Confuzzling) lol It sounds promising at first, and clearly there was a lot of work put into it. But ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: What Is Love
Harro, Bloodblackrose ^-^ I’ve seen your replies to other people, so I thought I check your work out. I effing loved this. I reading the first few lines, I was ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: anonymous red rose
Hi, Firestarter ^-^ First off, this was epic. MORE than epic, it was legend. Lol And btw, you DO have style. Don't listen to people who have nothing better to ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: My Dreams
When I look up at the stars, I just don't see little lights. I see a world of possibilities, That can take flight. I know I am just hoping, That ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: We the Fallen
I thoguth it was awesome, to tell you the truth ^-^ Its simple and easy to follow. I loved the way it reminded me of the Bible, and then at ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Rainbows
Harro, TwinSeed. ^-^ (There are 147 words written to this poem.) First off, I love this line: I know that no one lives forever, but when you were taken from ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Withering Love
Wow, I loved how the opening and the closing were some of the most epic lines. ^-^ My personal favourite line was: Till the morning dawn breaks, and his soul ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Garden
I thought it was pretty good. Maybe it’s just me, but with lyrics, I’m more into meaningful songs. BUT! That being said, this is a lighthearted song, which also serves ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: God
Sorry, vampirelover101, but I totally and absolutely disagree with you. Writing comes from the heart, and God clearly dwells within this girl's heart. She writes what's written on her heart, ...
Aug 14, 2011
