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Re: It's You, My Love! (By Jasmine)
ill admit, im not at all familiar with this series, but from what i can tell, the narratrator is someone who deeply loves their partner. I think that its done ...
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Re: Xavier-Love in decaying hearts
i think that this is a very good concept for characters, but i do believe that the execution is a little off. It feels vague in some parts, but too ...
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Re: “What We Never Said” part 2
I really enjoyed this poem, and i think it is the perfect reflection on how much fathers are willing to sacrifice for the future of their children. it also displays ...
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Re: Elisa’s origin: Souls and Roses 🧚🏽♀️🌸
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May 27
This story does a really good job of feeling like a fairytale at first before slowly turning into something darker and more emotional. One thing I liked immediately was the ... -
Re: precautions to avoid being drafted
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May 27
This poem stood out to me because it feels extremely personal and emotionally honest. Rather than simply talking about masculinity and femininity in a broad way, the writer makes the ... -
Re: Chained
This was an interesting story. I like how you gave your character a background, showed that he had not always wanted to be an executioner, i also like how you ...
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Re: Deep Space Chapter 2: Journey to the Center of the Universe
I like this story, its interesting and i love how you write. Firstly, grammatically, your writing is extremely good, from what I could see there were very few mistakes, if ...
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Re: Shhh...It's a Secret
This is an interesting story, and i very much like how you wrote it. It sounds like a poem, with a certain flow, almost lyrical. I also like how you ...
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Re: The creeping, crawling feeling of love
I love how you express the deep and complex emotions of Edwin, it really helps the reader to empathize with our fellow. I also enjoy the way you relate to ...
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Re: Through the Poppies
This is a nice and light short story. I loved your use of imagery throughout the story, it brings a bright and sunny picture to the mind. Your use of ...
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Re: The Game
This story is an incredibly powerful exploration of self-doubt, isolation, and the psychological effects of feeling trapped in a cycle of failure and rejection. I like your skillful uses of ...
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Re: First part
The opening paragraph expertly draws readers into a chilling, atmospheric world. The detailed imagery of the snowstorm and Korin’s determined, silent movements create a strong sense of tension. You'
Mar 29, 2025
