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ChaoticRodent

  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: It's You, My Love! (By Jasmine)

    ill admit, im not at all familiar with this series, but from what i can tell, the narratrator is someone who deeply loves their partner. I think that its done ...

    Jul 13
  • Short Story » Other, Supernatural Re: Xavier-Love in decaying hearts

    i think that this is a very good concept for characters, but i do believe that the execution is a little off. It feels vague in some parts, but too ...

    Jul 13
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: “What We Never Said” part 2

    I really enjoyed this poem, and i think it is the perfect reflection on how much fathers are willing to sacrifice for the future of their children. it also displays ...

    Jul 13
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Elisa’s origin: Souls and Roses 🧚🏽‍♀️🌸

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    This story does a really good job of feeling like a fairytale at first before slowly turning into something darker and more emotional. One thing I liked immediately was the ...

    May 27
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: precautions to avoid being drafted

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    This poem stood out to me because it feels extremely personal and emotionally honest. Rather than simply talking about masculinity and femininity in a broad way, the writer makes the ...

    May 27
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror Re: Chained

    This was an interesting story. I like how you gave your character a background, showed that he had not always wanted to be an executioner, i also like how you ...

    Mar 30, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Deep Space Chapter 2: Journey to the Center of the Universe

    I like this story, its interesting and i love how you write. Firstly, grammatically, your writing is extremely good, from what I could see there were very few mistakes, if ...

    Mar 29, 2025
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Shhh...It's a Secret

    This is an interesting story, and i very much like how you wrote it. It sounds like a poem, with a certain flow, almost lyrical. I also like how you ...

    Mar 29, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: The creeping, crawling feeling of love

    I love how you express the deep and complex emotions of Edwin, it really helps the reader to empathize with our fellow. I also enjoy the way you relate to ...

    Mar 29, 2025
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Through the Poppies

    This is a nice and light short story. I loved your use of imagery throughout the story, it brings a bright and sunny picture to the mind. Your use of ...

    Mar 29, 2025
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Game

    This story is an incredibly powerful exploration of self-doubt, isolation, and the psychological effects of feeling trapped in a cycle of failure and rejection. I like your skillful uses of ...

    Mar 29, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: First part

    The opening paragraph expertly draws readers into a chilling, atmospheric world. The detailed imagery of the snowstorm and Korin’s determined, silent movements create a strong sense of tension. You'

    Mar 29, 2025


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