My brightly colored wings fluttered up and down, taking in the dazzling sunlight and the soft breeze. Fields and fields of orange and yellow poppies decended before me. I flitted around and above them as the wind blew me along their colorful petals.
Laughter floated through the air to my tiny ears. A small girl in a summer dress ran past me her curly red hair streaming behind her. She was closely followed by her parents. Happy smiles brightened their faces. I rested lightly on petal and watched them. The father picked the girl up and twirled her around in his arms. She erupted in a fit of wild screams and giggles. Settling down he engulfed her in an enormous hug while the mother gently placed a hand on the girls head. I fluttered my wings cheerily at the sight, took off, and made my way once more through the poppies.
Very lovely language you used. This piece is beautiful.
It would look better if you had a space between the two paragraphs. I really have nothing else negative to say, except that this felt more like a "Narrative Poetry" than "Other Fiction".
Keep writing.
Hello, there! I realize this is an old topic, but since everyone seems to be reviewing it. I thought I'd try as well. 
Comma after "me."A small girl in a summer dress ran past me her curly red hair streaming behind her.
A petal? THE petal? you need something before "petal."I rested lightly on petal and watched them.
Comma after "down."Settling down he engulfed her in an enormous hug while the mother gently placed a hand on the girls head.
lengthen it out. You show us that you can describe really well, so make more of it. What do the parents look like? What are they wearing? Where are they standing? And the poppies, are they blowing? Does the happy family notice the butterfly? Expaaand.
Other than that... wait, why are we reviewing a three year old topic?
Thise was very nice.
Aside from the comma mistake ashleylee pointed out, I found one mistake:
girls head.
Interesting. I only noticed one tiny thing:
Laughter floated through the air to my tiny ears. A small girl in a summer dress ran past me her curly red hair streaming behind her.
Wow, I loved this! Simple, yet elegant and refined. You have a great writing style! I can't think of any criticism, I just know I'm going to bed happy! Thank you.
It's very good. I like sweet, innocent little pieces like this.
Two suggestions: (1) Lengthen it a bit with more descriptions, (2) Break it up into more paragraphs so it's easier to read. Chunky paragraphs are visually tedious and tend to drive readers away.
Other than that, very good job, I enjoyed it. 
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Thankyou very much! I don't know the color of their clothes though, I was more concentrating on the butterfly (if you didn't know I was writing from the view point of a butterfly) but yeah, Thanks! *bows*
I really liked this, even though it is rather short...one thing, though, that caught my eye- you describe really, really vividly, but you don't say anything about the little girl's dress, other than what color it is. Same with the parents, too, you don't say anything about them. What kind of clothes were they wearing?
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