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Re: Mutiny
Hey Candy- Well first i would like to say that this is a great poetry piece. I would like to know what were you thinking when your wrote this specific ...
Apr 9, 2015 -
Re: Tears of Rainbows
OMG! To be a 10 year old you sure have the writing material I can see you writing one of those dark mysterious scary books which I think you should ...
Apr 9, 2015 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 31
This is very good it looks like you are a natural born writer but I think I should read the whole post instead of just reading this chapter.. Here were ...
Apr 9, 2015 -
Re: The true suicide story
Ava... Tell me who is this girl does she go to our school... "In 6th grade things started to look up for her! She had a friend who she had ...
Mar 6, 2015 -
Re: New Souls
Hey there, omg i love this so much i need you to make more but i love this one "A funeral such as this should be accompanied by rain." were ...
Mar 6, 2015 -
Re: All This Time Prologue
Omg you said this wasn't good which it is I think you should continue writing more and more and more lol I'm over exaggerating but I still think you should ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: All This Time Prologue
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Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: Their Date Chapter 1
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Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: Blank Canvas
Hello, since you were really desperate for a review well here is one right here. Well first I love your poem it really fulfills the place of an artist and ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: Blood Haven: Chapter 5
I really loved this but I have a few problems with the grammar punctuations and etc. But you also did very good but I think you should probably fix a ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: Flora Dennis and the Island of Two Eyes - Chapter One
I really loved this but I have a few problems with the grammar punctuations and etc. But you also did very good but I think you should probably fix a ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: The Field Slaves
I really loved this but I have a few problems with the grammar punctuations and etc. But you also did very good but I think you should probably fix a ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: IRONCLAW 4.1: Lyla
I really loved this but I have a few problems with the grammar punctuations and etc. But you also did very good but I think you should probably fix a ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: LAPIS :Chapter 23:
I really loved this but I have a few problems with the grammar punctuations and etc. But you also did very good but I think you should probably fix a ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Genkii Chapter 3
I really loved this but I have a few problems with the grammar punctuations and etc. But you also did very good but I think you should probably fix a ...
Dec 28, 2014