Chanson

i liked the idea behind this. an di liekd how it was written. i don't really have much to say, except i liked it. and i'm trying to write a ...

i think you can love someone and fall out of love. love can't always last forever, but that doesn't make it any less real. that doesn't mean you lose all ...

i agree with the above, the first verse as quite alright but it seemed strangely disconnected to the second verse, as if you had suddenly decided to write a new ...

personally, i thought this was mediocre. i didn't find it particularly gripping - the main character was neither likeable nor interesting and the whole sex scene was boring; perhaps as ...

this was really great. there were things i saw that i felt could have been changed but they are tiny and nitpicky and i can't even remember them as i ...

nice imagery and whatnot, i mean obviously it's a good poem but i just felt that the emotions were surpressed, they weren't strong enough for me. i felt like less ...

this wasn't too bad, except there was just this over all feel of self-pity. obviously, it's a poem about being depressed but at the same time, for me there was ...

this was too wordy for me, it didn't really flow well. some lines seemed to go on forever. there are some good ideas here (like the one of him taking ...

huh, i thought i had commented on this. it was pretty and intelligent and very well written, without seeming forced or contrived. perhaps some descriptions were too much (the first ...

easy to read, my eyes just kind of skimmed along it. it was pretty and enjoyable, not particularly striking although i couldn't quite put my finger on why that was. ...

i think the guy came across as arrogant, like he thinks he is above everyone else. so maybe you meant to write about a character who is a bit of ...

the whole poem needs more emotion. i mean, because it was so short i actually read it but if it had been even the slightest bit longer i don't thinki ...

i liked the idea behind this. the idea is over-used and nothing i haven't read before but you managed ot make it sound interesting and a little fresh and it ...

i loved this. some parts didn't flow for me but this is just a stupid criticism that i am putting because i am very tired and i feel like being ...

Wow, I really liked this. I suppose, even more then the writing (which was good), I just loved the idea. It totally infuriated me (I wanted to scream at her ...