ChangeTheWorld

Hello! You were such a nice person to me I figured I'd come over here and give feedback! Be warned, I sometimes ramble and make no sense, also I can ...

Here goes nothing. Hope this helps! :D As he was thinking back on his day he realized he hadn't seen Rosalie at all; today but it was still a good ...

Hey there :) I give in," he threw his hands in the air So yeah, if you aren't leading into or out of a dialogue tag then it should be ...

Hey again!!!! :D Which is not technically a fail I think this would sound better as "failing" instead of "a fail." (I am not specifying which 'somewhere' you can work ...

Change here :) Here goes nothing. and eyes , warm brown ones I'm pretty sure there should be that comma there. To the point where I would find myself bringing ...

Hola my amiga! Last chapter right? :) My house is a small cottage on the outskirts of Silverpin, with ivy creeping stealthily up and over onto the thatched roof and ...

Okay one more review :) It's a blank and white wall. Don't I know the feeling? There's a speck of color on my blank wall! Clever. This is cute. I'd ...

Review again! Because I want my next star and you liked mine :) my stomach is boiling. I feel like this is worded weird. I get what you're saying but ...

Hey! Review time :) Each syllable pronounced and with care and exactness. A sweet, flowery smile sprang onto the my kindergarten teacher's face. Just little suggestions. A sharp gasp, indicating ...

I'm trying to review all of them with less than three but the one with two I already reviewed :( Anyway, here goes again. I'll try my hand at these ...

Back again. This one looks especially lonely :( Gonna fix that! Hey so, as always I wish you'd just make them longer. You have fantastic, deep, emotional ideas and if ...

So long!!!! Me read!!! So I generally do line by line as I'm reading but so far I have nothing to nitpick so yay! It was through experience that I ...

When You asked for a review I wasn't expecting you to already have 12! I hope I have something new and helpful to say though ;) They muttered words to ...

I'm on my way to having read all your stuff! Does that excite you? No? Not really...? the first day of my tutoring to work I think this should be ...

Back again! Be expecting more :) There was once a day when So The way the poem starts with "If I could remember" sets up a certain structure I think ...