Chandni

hey you guys got nymore comments on this ??

I know you sucked jups it definniteley did I wasn't sure of it that's why I posted it Sometimes something you hate turns out to be something liked by others...NOT ...

Thnx Snoink I'm not English so sometimes I've got some problems with my Grammar :wink: OOPs I Capatilized the G in Grammar and again LOL :P

Nice !! I especially like this : we sit on a cold brick wall. he turns my worlds upside umop. down That's really cool I like it !!

Its funny LOL :P

I'm sorry but I have to agree with 'The Black Rose' Try better next time :?

Thank you guys..I really worked on this poem before i posted it so I guess my Hard worked is paid :wink: :D

Okay this poem was like not very good :? I should work on it a bit more The Unexpected had happened and just when it had passed I had allready ...

This is very good...I like it I'm soo impressed by guys who can rhyme...Wow I love you right now...hahahha I really liked Good job !!

thank you and I've made the changes you told me to :wink:

Thnx :D

thnx..I don't think its one of my best ones tough

hey thnx Chevy but I wasn't feeling comfertable by putting "" semicollons (or whatever you call them) Cuz that would sound a bit joke to..

I know... :lol:

Once again I am flawwless, I can sink in your words, so soft an mellow yet so complicated they are