politicaltinkerbell--
This is way over-the-top with its larger-than-life "diagonal universes" and "souls to sell." Trying to be profound rarely coincides with actually being profound.
As for the rest of this: well, the poem says nothing we don't already know about lucid dreaming. It reduces to long-winded definition that really doesn't generate interest on the part of the reader.
Better luck next time,
Brad
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