Published December 7, 2005
There's a place where all My toughts flow
A Place where all My feelings manage to go
A Waistland deserted and all Alone
A Waistland cold and all of My own
A Waistland where you can See, My Life as a Person
A Waistland by Me
P.S Pretty Short I know...Btw is Waistland written right ?? or is is Waisteland I had some doubts about it..
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Thnx Snoink I'm not English so sometimes I've got some problems with my Grammar
OOPs I Capatilized the G in Grammar and again LOL
Actually, it's "wasteland." A rather strange word, now that I think of it.
My suggestion? Don't capitalize everything. You capitalize wasteland, my, alone, life, and person. Try not to capitalize that much.
Also, I'm sure this is just a typo, but it should be "thoughts" instead of "toughts."
Not too bad though.