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CesareBorgia

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Vampiric; Chapter Five

    Hey Cesare Borgia here for a review, Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, I didn't want you think I got bored of the story. Nitpicks 1] I just have ...

    Apr 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Cardboarded

    Hey Cesare here for a review, I loved this poetry. Your word choice and the way you write is very unique. It's not like anything I've seen before. Nit's/Sugg's ~*~ ...

    Apr 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Think

    Hey Shawn, it's Cesare here for a review, This is a really brief poem, as @RoyalHigness said. I love how you repeat "Do Not Think" over, and over again. Nitpicks: ...

    Apr 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Benches

    Hey CesareBorgia here for a review. I have to say that this poem involved great brevity, but somehow still left an imprint in my mind. This is going to be ...

    Apr 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: God Called Her Home

    Hey CesareBorgia here for a review. I liked the the theme of the poem. It had a really good flow to it. I liked how you used God in the ...

    Apr 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: "Happy Birthday, Fred."

    Hey Cesare here for a review. Well I know that you are a fellow Harry Potter Fan (love that series), and when I first saw the title, I thought it ...

    Apr 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Vampiric; Chapter Four

    Hey CesareBorgia here for a review. “We have a problem,” he said, pacing the length of my room. “It’s the Rebellion.” I love how you waited a couple of chapters ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: The House of Sand-- Chapter 1 Part 1

    Hey CesareBorgia here for a review, As a new novel/story writer (read comments below), I feel that this story was very good. Faylinn shuddered, clasping her knees close to her ...

    Apr 1, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: The Night The Dark Lord Fell

    Hey CesareBorgia, here for a review, Well first I have to say that I am a HUGE fan of Harry Potter. I love how you add more detail to what ...

    Apr 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: What now?

    Hey Cesare Borgia, here for a review, You are getting better at poetry. And you starting to write more of it. I first have to say, that this was a ...

    Mar 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: I can't stop it

    Hey this is Cesrae Borgia, Here for a review. Well I have to say, T.J. you are getting better at writing poetry. Compared to when you wrote A Place Of ...

    Mar 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: My Heart Beats.....

    Hey this Cesare Borgia, here for a review, well obviously. This poem is so good, that I don't even have any nitpicks. Which is very good, because I always have ...

    Mar 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: ​Murderous Cold

    Hey, Cesare Borgia here for a review. Happy Review Day, I just have to say, that I didn't even read the poem yet, and the title had made me want ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Strength

    Hey Cesare Borgia, Happy review day, I just have to say that this poem, has great brevity. Though it was a very good poem, I just have to say that ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Other Re: Life or Death? Chapter 1- How do I Overcome this Past?

    Hey this is Cesare Borgia, Happy review day, this is what first kept me reading. Have you ever had a nightmare in which the person or creature in it is ...

    Mar 30, 2014


Fairy Tales are more than true; not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten.
— G.K. Chesterton