CateRose17

Bruh! NOOOOOOO, they can't kill Claude!!!! What the heck! Anyways.... That was totally unexpected! But hey, this is literature, expect the unexpected, right? Okay there were a few tiny things ...

Hi there! Wow, that was a turn I didn't expect and I was definitely surprised because the title and the first page of Chapter One didn't match, but that's what ...

Oh wow... This spoke to me on so many levels. My favorite time of any day is when I am able to go to my creek or trail and just ...

This was a really good chapter. I liked it a lot. You put the right amount of description that gave the imagination of the readers to see, but not enough ...

The way you worded everything reminded me of a painting, funny because the whole thing is about an art work. It was- in a way- cold in your style. It ...

I love this! There were only two little things that I noticed as grammatical errors. The "of" between "couple" and "years. and then I believe you meant "our" instead of ...

Imagery! I love it all. You did so well in that aspect that I actually felt like I was in the scene. It was calming and soothing. I love how ...

HOLY COW! You just keep getting better and better, don't you?! You need to get this published for real somehow. Okay, so let me get down to reviewing. Grammer: So ...

This is gorgeous. Lord have mercy, it's so well worded. It's got truth because in some relationships, lies do protect the other person. I felt some sort of beautiful terror ...

The first one was more intense in a straight forward sense, but this one...wow... it's got a beauty to it. A depressing beauty, but a darling and perfect beauty nonetheless. ...

Love, love, love this! You are just an amazing writer. The way you thought this out and placed little hints for Ember to follow and you made her curious. Your ...

Wow, I respect your ability to capture such feeling, and more so your ability to capture it when you're the one watching. I went through ( and still do to ...

I loved this! Dude it was awesome! I love cliffhangers and usually I'm not able to get good ones often, but I am glad I stumbled upon this beauty here! ...

This was a lot. Man, can you pack a punch with just a few scenes. I was feeling it with your characters. And I loved the ending scene, you made ...

Bruhhhhhhh....... really though. This is deep. You sure you're fifteen? I wish I could pack a punch in such a limited amount of words. There's so much pain, so much ...